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I Will
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I Will |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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I Will I will let you into my heart where I will hold you close with warmth I will let you open the doors kept firmly closed and locked I will share the love I have for HIM who dwells on high I will give the gift of who I am deep within my soul I will share with you light and love and laughter I will walk the forest and listen to the brook I will share the world and hear The Word I will gaze into the night sky at great HIS love I will sigh at the beauties as I see the wonders given I will give thanks for all that HE has bless me with in life I will pray that you receive the blessings HE would give to you come share my heart giving all my love with open arms hold you will I Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Wow, that is too cool! *grins* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely, Karen. Always. Sandra |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
what a beautiful presentation of such loving words!! How do you do that?! It's really wonderful  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karen, this is beautiful and so well done...I always admire you for the effort and professionalism you put into your work. This beautiful piece is no exception  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen....you do it so well....You are a master of designer poetry....Nicely done. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic...a message within a star from Startime...James |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
this is brilliant and pretty! cottage |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Karen, I love this! What a beautiful 'shape' masterpiece This is a keeper! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Forevermore, lovely message and then...from nowhere a star! Amazing. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Judging from your words, you have alot of love in your heart and so much to give. Not to mention your Star in place that shined so brightly in this. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Karen: This is lovely!! and very beautifully written Brava Bella!! Roniece |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow Karen, this is too cool. I love the way you got that star shape, and the words in it are so beautiful. You're a great talent lady If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
Oh, I was thinking about whether or not there could be a star-shaped one...and, voila! That's great! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
whoa ... very cool indeed.... add my name to the list of impressed. Achieving that shape must have been a task...yet you made it look easy. And a wonderful uplifting message held within Well done Poetess Startime I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain |
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