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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-11-01 06:30 PM


(This is dedicated to my dear friend Tara (Rosepetals25)

Rainbow Dancer’s Serenade Of Eternity (Dedicated To My Friend Tara And Her Love)
11/1/01


“A sweet romeo rides alone into this enchanted meadow, spellbound by the beauty he foresees,
A warm smile shimmering like the rainbow reflections casting upon the waterfalls in the lush heart of the vale
Stopping, climbing off his horse to relax and lay upon the gorgeous emerald hillsides, seeing that this new world to him is magical
He can hear a lovely angel sing from only miles away, smiling thinking to himself “What if the meadow can offer true love?”

Sweet princess charming dreams in her flowerbed overlooking the glass palace, her hair shimmering in the light breeze
With the gentle comfort that her prince charming is not far away, and she will love him soon
She brushes her long hair as she looks out into the meadow’s distance, sighing with joy
That she can hear his heartbeat in the lilac winds, as she rushes with a smile to find her romeo

These Whispers of Eternity sound in the ears of this dear romeo in the midst of his peaceful slumber on the grass
Her mellifluous kiss of desire wakes him in pleasure to follow the voice of his desired love
Skipping through the woods in complete happiness, the prince and the princess run for each other
Finally the crescendo of passion comes to a stop, true lovers embraced against each others heart

Looking deep into each others eyes under the snowy-lavender flowered willow trees, the two hold each others hands gently,
He says,

“In this meadow my love for you has come, as the sun kisses my heart
May we gaze into each others hearts eternally, my love will you shall never part”

She says,

“Today the robin sings deep down happily in my soul, in all lively spirits
Kissed by a red rose of love, from your heart that beats heavenly in bliss!”

Smiling together in the sweet words have been told, the loving prince holds his lovely princess around the neck, as she bends in slowly to embrace his lips
Moaning softly, feeling the warm passion between them, they sit down beneath a magical oak tree whispering with poetic enchantment
Kneeling down against the soft bark of the tree, reciting hearts poetry in the meadow mist
True lovers hearts touch, as the prince and princess of each others souls finally meet together in heavenly embrace


And the loving prince charming gallops off into his fair maiden’s heart
The lovely princess embraces into his gentle arms and helps her up on his white sterling of timeless love, and they say together,
“Forever and a day may our fairy tale romance last happily ever after
May the love we have unraveled in this sweet meadow sing on forever”



[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 11-01-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-01 06:41 PM


Noah,
  
    Awwwww... this is sooo beautiful! I'm so honored that you dedicated this to me and Dave.  *hugs*   You are such a softly romantic writer.  It makes my heart sigh Thank you Noah.

Hugs,
Tara

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2 posted 2001-11-01 08:16 PM


Fairy tales do come true and it is nice to read about a magic place where the do.  In a world such as ours in a time such as we are in, it is great to read of this magic land.

Dan

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3 posted 2001-11-01 11:58 PM


Noah, isn't love grand?    You've captured both of them so well.  Nice work, fellow poet.

Michael

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4 posted 2001-11-02 12:08 PM



What a sweet, passionate tribute, Noah!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

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5 posted 2001-11-02 07:31 PM


This is beautiful!  
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6 posted 2001-11-02 07:34 PM


This is what love is about. Lovely poem.
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7 posted 2001-11-03 12:53 PM


wow, noah, what a touching tribute to love - and very kind of you indeed to dedicate it to tara and i.... thank you!
wonderful writing, man, keep it up!

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8 posted 2001-11-06 07:22 PM


very colorful, Noah, and I'm glad you decided to stick around these parts!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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9 posted 2001-11-06 07:33 PM


Simply beautiful write, Noah.  What a wonderful gift!!  

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by the grace of God.
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