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Hollowman
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0 posted 2001-11-01 03:12 PM



Let her into your world
see the stories of past unfold
history of boxed emotions, unravelled
walk down these roads not often travelled

A spec of light that shines so bright
shows me the way in the darkest night
always there, guiding me
to a place mortals cannot see

Heaven on earth, or heaven sent
this feeling I have is hell bent
Happiness sought like the holy grail
my strength though weak shall prevail
no more long empty dark nights
just the pinnacle, of love scaled

Come with me, entwine our hearts
no time for error, or repeated starts
dive in head first and drown in lust
for between us there lies a trust
built from love, tempered with steel
you know i am a man who feels
the passions of flesh, the touches so light
that fuel the silent love long into the night

The space between us, is no more
like carpet you lay me softly on the floor
Hug and hold me, be my skin
and together, forever just fall in
love....
Richy

© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 2001-11-01 03:16 PM


"dive in head first and drown in lust"

YES!!! hehe

loved this one!  

Child_Like_UK
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since 2001-10-29
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2 posted 2001-11-01 03:31 PM


I love you Rich x

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
3 posted 2001-11-01 09:03 PM


Wow, great write Richy. Love that last stanza.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-11-03 09:18 AM


Simply... beautiful...

~Tier

Mon Cherie
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Land of Never-ending Summers
5 posted 2001-11-03 09:46 AM


I love this so much!
It's so well written!! ^.^

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2001-11-03 03:05 PM


YES!!!  
Dive right in...what an inviting  line.

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