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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-11-01 09:33 AM



she calls me sweet friend
yet her eyes say much, much more
and her nearness warms
~*~
strolling through the park
her arm in mine as we walk
headed for the zoo
~*~
she asked a question
why don’t you like to picnic
I responded thus
~*~
we shall one day love
when I have found the best place
good enough for you
~*~
she smiled and said dear
love is what binds us as one
my beautiful heart
~*~
I was overwhelmed
My heart bursting with true love
I embraced her there
~*~
checking carefully
and finding no rose bushes
we found solitude
~*~
as we lay embraced
lips scorching, bodies writhing
the lion escaped

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-01 09:42 AM


Now that is really scary....from ants to lions. Oh dear me. Will you never get to find happiness in the arms of one of passions ladies?

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet
2 posted 2001-11-01 10:09 AM



Interloper~ Psst...I'll let you in on a little secret...that lion was one of my buddies!

Hugs,
~Krista
  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

The Rusty Knight
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3 posted 2001-11-01 10:27 AM


Love the last line! *S*

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Decaflame
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4 posted 2001-11-01 11:58 AM



What if we were to look a little closer, are the innuendos running rampant?

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Gaia
5 posted 2001-11-01 12:06 PM


LOL, lions??  Are the tigers and bears next? You have a great series going here, Interloper. Do you stay up all night now just to keep up with the list?  When it's done (if ever) it really should be published. We may all need an extra hard drive to store this on.    
walker
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6 posted 2001-11-01 01:15 PM


Another great one, surprised me with the lion, great inspiration.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2001-11-01 01:37 PM


LOL...rather have the ants than the lion!
Running out of steam yet, Interloper?

Nightshade
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just out of reach
8 posted 2001-11-01 02:34 PM


"Lions and tigers and bears....oh my!!" sweet Interloper...what next? hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2001-11-01 03:45 PM


Oh gee interloper! What a surprise it was to find something posted in here for me. You even made me blush. I thought I was past that stage. You just made my day seem a whole lot brighter. Thank you for putting a   on my face today.
Jenn Cirrincione
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10 posted 2001-11-01 03:52 PM


hehe...this is craziness. I'm really starting to like these challanges    

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

lunatic
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11 posted 2001-11-01 04:05 PM


If you think this is crazy, wait until yours is posted

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

SEA
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with you
12 posted 2001-11-01 07:03 PM


ok that is it..... I am beyond jealous now   is it my turn yet?!   (no patience I tell you)
The Lady of Shallot
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13 posted 2001-11-01 08:18 PM




Run!  Run!  He's heading in your direction!!!!!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Tracey
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14 posted 2001-11-01 08:33 PM


ROFL.!!!Lions escaping???!!! I got off lightly, I was only interuppted by the pastor!!! What will you come up with next???

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

catalinamoon
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15 posted 2001-11-02 09:56 AM


And things were going so well, too.
LOL
Sandra

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