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Startime
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0 posted 2001-11-01 09:10 AM


Speaking From The Dust

Reverently I turn each page
with joy upon my face
I close my eyes to this new age
and fly through darkest space

To another time going back
I learn of people there
History of the land I track
making legal and fair

During my study of the laws
I found a burning fire
Written in dusty books the cause
visions they did inspire

Our lost world of the living past
now speaking from the dust
This new world opening so vast
to search them out I must

Recorded clearly were these names
the King did grant with lands
In order listed who had claims
passed from father to son's hands

Craving to know of what they thought
and how they lived their lives
What things settlers bartered or bought
what was it like for wives

What beliefs were taught in those days
and what laws were discussed
I want to understand their ways
to know if life was just

I breathe the ancient leather smell
revering the old script
And feel the pull of magic spell
under it's call I slipped

A Law Library on the coast
into the past took me
So I sit among long dead ghosts
and read with intense glee

Karen Torbiak 2001©


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-11-01 09:30 AM



Now you're talking my language!  'Tis a keeper, for sure!  Thank you!

Robert A
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2 posted 2001-11-01 01:29 PM


sometimes the best lessons are learned without books and without dust, now where do you find a place with no dust!  
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2001-11-01 01:31 PM


I breathe the ancient leather smell
revering the old script
And feel the pull of magic spell
under it's call I slipped
The spell definatley inspired you.  Wonderful write!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2001-11-01 02:04 PM


I have to ask if you were researching your family tree or simply reading up on history?  Intrigueing poem and very nicely done Startime.
Startime
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5 posted 2001-11-01 02:12 PM


Sunshine....thank you. I love history and learning about how people used to live. I am glad you liked it.  

Robert A....I agree..there are many lessons we learn without the use of books. In this case the lessons had to do with the law and how it affected peoples lives.  

Gentle Spirit....I seem to have a thirst for knowledge about our past. I love to learn how people once lived.  

BluesSerenade....This poem was inspired from the time when I was studying to become a Paralegal. I loved to get lost in the Law Library in New Brunswick, researching land titles. It is amazing how much you can find out about people from those dusty old records.   I hope that answers your question.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2001-11-01 02:22 PM


Do you adhere to British Common Law as we do in 49 of our 50 states?

Well writtena and a joy to read

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
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7 posted 2001-11-01 02:53 PM


Interloper....Yes most of Canada does adhere to the British Common Law. Quebec however does not. Quebec adheres to Civil Law. Quebec's civil law dates back to the Roman Empire, and reflects many of the precepts of French law. I am glad you enjoyed this poem.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon
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8 posted 2001-11-01 07:12 PM


Karen, I love learning new things about the past, this was so richly done, and sounds like a wonderful adventure
Sandra

The Rusty Knight
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9 posted 2001-11-01 07:54 PM


If I have to go to the court house to look up anything I try to either go early in the morning knowing I will get side tracked 20 times reading of past records or the last thing in the afternoon so I don't have time too.  I loved you poem because now I know I have company in my searching.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Magnus
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10 posted 2001-11-01 07:57 PM


wow oh wow....dust of the books and send this
lady to graduate school.....great write Star.
Yes, you can learn so much from under the
dusty covers....

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