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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2001-11-01 03:39 AM



IN YOUR EYES...

They say the eyes are the window to the soul

Sometimes in your eyes I see

Loneliness
   Betrayal
      Sadness
              and
                  Hurt

Is this true or are you hiding behind a facade of
Kindess
   Compassion
       Smiles
              and
                  Laughter

Sometimes the window gets too fogged for me to see
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

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Mon Cherie
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1 posted 2001-11-01 05:06 AM


Ooohhh.. hope the window will clear up soon and u'll find the truth within. Right now, I think this is really a beautiful and truthful piece of work.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2001-11-01 05:10 AM


Mon Cherie: You are very kind with your comments thank you and I have just read your pieces I will respond in kind :-)  Roniece
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