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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2001-11-01 03:30 AM



MY DREAM OF YOU....

You visited me last night while I slept
How happy I was to see you again
I still grieve for you each day
When I woke I remembered you had told me you would
Always be with me
Then I smiled for I knew you always kept your word
How lucky am I to have had a Mother as beautiful
As you...
Roniece Dawson-Bruce


© Copyright 2001 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-01 04:33 AM


I feel that this is quite a sad poem, dreaming of someone who is no longer.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2001-11-01 05:07 AM


Mon Cherie:  Thank  you for comments - I miss my Mother more than words can say but I know she is with me each day......Roniece
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3 posted 2001-11-01 06:11 AM


I enjoyed this so much, good to see you, welcome if you're new!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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4 posted 2001-11-01 10:51 AM


A beautiful tribute to your mother. I can see you great love for her in each word of this poem. I love it. Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-11-01 11:08 AM


Roniece~
This is so tenderly done~
Big *Hugs*

It's nice to see you here with us~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-11-01 11:21 AM


God bless you. Your Mother doubtless waits for your company in etenity and watches to ensure you're content while with us.
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7 posted 2001-11-01 11:27 AM


Beautifully done.  You expressed this with a quiet gentleness.   My compliments
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8 posted 2001-11-01 11:37 AM


Some of our best writings come straight from the heart and this one did for sure.

Dan

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9 posted 2001-11-01 01:21 PM


This is nice, real honest words here  
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10 posted 2001-11-01 01:52 PM


Roniece,
I lost my mother as a child, and now the mother of two girls, my biggest fear is not being here for them.
beautiful tribute for your dear mother.

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

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11 posted 2001-11-01 02:00 PM


I lost my mother over 30 years ago and it feels so good to see her a dream.  It doesn't happen too often but when it does...it is incredible...thank you for this one.  Nancy
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2001-11-01 11:59 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments - it's nice to be writing again and I'm thankful that I can write my feelings for my Mother.   Roniece
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