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Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 2001-11-01 12:44 PM

I grieve, not for you, but for myself.
Knowing that when you are gone
I will go with you.

The flesh will remain, but the spirit will fade.
For without you, I am nothing.

I know this because, before you,
I was empty inside, like a vacant house.
Until you made my heart your home.

Filling me with laughter, pain and memories.

With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2001-11-01 02:34 AM

Lucie,
I know how real all of those feelings are! Thank goodness for a future. Hang on!

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

2 posted 2001-11-01 06:45 AM

A really well written work. ^,^
It is really nice to find someone who can stay in our hearts like u said, but it's also scary to think that this person will be so important that he controls what we feel as well.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-11-01 10:08 AM

My heart goes out to you, dear one. Once someone is in your heart it is just not possible to take them out again. I pray the future will have all the joy and happiness you desire to fill your heart again.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

4 posted 2001-11-01 10:19 AM

I was empty inside, like a vacant house.
Until you made my heart your home.

Filling me with laughter, pain and memories.

Poems should evoke emotions in those that read them. This one sure does I know these must be very rough times for you. I hope writing helps to focus on the good memories.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-11-01 11:06 AM

Lucie~
This piece is so poignantly written~
It's so nice to have you back with us~
I've enjoyed reading your versatile pieces~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Amber Dawn
Junior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 22
Minnesota

6 posted 2001-11-01 11:51 AM

A very scary emotion that is honest and real. Very well done.

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