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0 posted 2001-10-31 07:57 PM


(This poem is about the violence up in northern Ireland. This has made me feel very sad for years and my heart cries out to all these poor people being attacked. Much of my family heritage comes from Ireland and I just had to write my feelings out. Sorry for the downer. :-(

Don’t Drink From The Well
By: Noah Eaton
10/31/01

Move on over, there’s only room for me
Come now, come now, can you not see?
Reveal yourself, there’s no reason to hide
Open your eyes, fool, you are blind

Now you step foot and lay your feet down
And as you cry, I will spread my wings out

Dear one, dear one, stay inside your home
Your boat is off to sea, there is nowhere to go
Cohere, come here, I’ll keep you company
What were you expecting, where were you looking?

Now I see you shout as you look around
And as you cry, I will spread my wings out

I walk on these waters of lost souls
Murdered before these hands of greed

So I dance with these shadows of the shamans
And under the full moon I will cry…
Because you’re all bleeding now
You’re all bleeding now
You’re all screaming…

So I carry on with my tears
And I carry on with my pity
And I live on with my anger
I don’t show any mercy
And I feel all this rage
I’m crying on my hands and knees
And I hear our fathers collapsing
I hear these poor children screaming

Don’t drink from the well
There’s poison in the well
There's blood in the well
Stay close to your families

Don't drink from the well...

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-31 08:36 PM


Very sad but heartfelt.  I consider myself as "a man gifted with empathy".  I definitely feel your pain, and enjoyed your expression of it.  Being in the military I have seen some things I would rather not.  But so is life and eventually the answers to our questions.
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2 posted 2001-11-01 02:42 PM


Great expression of your feelings here in this poem. So many things happen in life and in so many different cultures that we don't always understand or even agree with. Somehow we have to have faith that a higher power will take control when the time is right.
  You seem to have a wonderful compassion for all of life and that is so commendable.

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-11-01 02:45 PM


Good write
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