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A moment for you

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Duncan
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0 posted 10-31-2001 07:15 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Duncan



These walls of hibernation
chilled with dreariness

I venture out
to the top porch step

warmed by an autumn sun
I daydream of you

and will the moment
to never end

© Copyright 2001 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 10-31-2001 07:19 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

*sigh* such romance flows from pens tonight. It seems the fullness of the harvest moon and the warmth of a setting autumn sun turns hearts to longing for someone to hold close to their hearts. I love this poem. Its tender beauty touches me softly.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Lady of Shallot
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2 posted 10-31-2001 07:23 PM       View Profile for The Lady of Shallot   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit The Lady of Shallot's Home Page   View IP for The Lady of Shallot

it's a wonderful feeling about ceasing time..I love that thought.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale


3 posted 10-31-2001 10:13 PM       View Profile for A Whisper's Caress   Email A Whisper's Caress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Whisper's Caress

and will the moment
to never end

sigh.......................

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

Balladeer
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4 posted 10-31-2001 10:49 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

We have all had those moments so perfect we wished for time to stand still....you describe it well, sir.
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


5 posted 10-31-2001 10:52 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Duncan, very very well done!  Enjoyed, Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Tracey
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6 posted 10-31-2001 11:13 PM       View Profile for Tracey   Email Tracey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tracey

*sigh*  I know this daydream so well, I know this moment so well. You put it so beautifully and tenderly Duncan
moments like this kissed by the sun
daydreams so lovely , hearts will be won
wanting the moment to live on like this
she may be also dreaming this bliss

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


7 posted 01-18-2003 07:24 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


To think
that we can will moments...
or anything else...

ah, the fallacies we
set ourselves up for...

only to hope, again.

Darn it Duncan...
you're a great read.
Duncan
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8 posted 01-18-2003 10:17 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

To think
that we can will moments...
or anything else...

It sure seemed possible at the time.     
Thanks Kari.
passing shadows
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great reading here in the back pages...I like this one much!
 
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