True Love (dedicated to Gabby my daughter)

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Open Poetry #16

True Love (dedicated to Gabby my daughter)

juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-10-31 07:11 PM

As all living creatures are born
this unknown feeling has grown
no title nor a name
just this strong feeling
that bursts into a flame
no site of some image is needed
to know this love is real

since u came to this world
i knew i loved u dearly
day by day i see u
my feelings for u are clearly
shown through my heart
its a sensation that i never felt b4
but still i know its ment to drive to u

i love u me sweet angelic daughter
u mean the world to me
i would never change
this abnormality i feel deep in me
its a true love
that grows as big it can be
cause u are my daughter
that brightens my family tree

LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE JUAN PABLO

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-31 07:21 PM

*sigh* MAGNIFICENT!!!There is some special about the love we have for a daughter. Well done. This beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Glenn Logan
Member

since 2001-10-10

Posts 111
Virginia

2 posted 2001-11-02 12:44 PM

A nice poem; I enjoyed it, and can easily relate to it.

Best wishes,

Glenn Logan

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