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Awaiting my liberty
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Awaiting my liberty |
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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
I see the sun of dusk, Look at it and it blinds me, It enters my soul like a bullet And awakens me. Opens my eyes firmly And enters into my heart, It runs threw my veins With a beautiful heat, A volatile heat, A heat of pleasure, A heat I do not know. I enter a glorious world, I see what I want And I want what I see. I loose my mind In this beautiful world of pleasure. I forget that thundering bullet That divides my soul, I forget that incredible love, That blinds me to frequent. I forget that abyss, In which I fall all the time. I forget that battle I lose day by day, Trying to move my boneless body. I think in nothing that will lose me, I think in me, And I lose my conscience. I turn around, I see a woman, Precious and indescribable, That revolves my mind, That changes my thoughts, That makes me think In the dawn of a new day, That soon will be here, And will brighten my being. I feel entertained for a moment, And I return to my boring duties. And I will soon see, I only dream, With a liberty I will soon arrive. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 BRAVO! What a great poem! And how are things down there? Are you being battered by the weather? Thanks for sharing this liberating piece. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 11-05-2001).] |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
K.Rebel~ What an intriguing train of thought with some good use of metaphor and imagery. I much enjoyed! And I missed your entrance poem so I will welcome you now  Welcome! Sit back and stay awhile Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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