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Rock This Heart

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vlraynes
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~*Rock This Heart*~

Awake
This sleeping heart
With gentle kiss of cheek
Tenderly whisper...'Come with me'
Then guide this wayward soul into the light
Weave fingers 'round this calloused hand
And kiss these chilled lips warm
Love...rock this heart
Awake

~vlraynes

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

© Copyright 2001 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 10-31-2001 06:20 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

It does kind of feel like that...very cool line.
SmittenKitten
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VickyChicky~ A perfect rictameter of love!   Love awakens so much in us...that we often didn't even know was there before.  Wonderful write!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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This is lovely Vicky. What a perfect way to describe loves awakening. This sings softly like a lullaby

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 11-01-2001 08:15 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh Vicky ... very beautifully written! The flow was just lovely, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Lovely flow Vicky, and so well written.  Enjoyed this much!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Vicky~ this would make for an excellent song...how beautiful!!! I love the feelings here. Very much  
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I love what you have created here, the words and the arrangement are just fabulous.  
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I normally do not use vulgar words to describe something...but darn!  This is good!  No.  Excellent!
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Vicky--I agree with the language of the lady above..wonderful poem!
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WHOOOOA!  tricky girl, that one gave me chills....!!  wow!  i like a lot....  a whole lot....

hope love rocks your boat soon....     

believe in your dreams...love will come  

hugs, g


~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 11-01-2001).]

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Vicky~
You definitely Rock the Rictameter right off the rhyme scale~
Nobody does 'em better~
This is so elegantly excellent~
Love ya', gal~
*Hugs*
~*Me*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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oops..did i bump that?       

teehee... lv,g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

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BRAVO!!! THIS RICTAMETER "ROCKS"!!! (smiles) May this true love forever blossom in your heart sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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enjoy
Lone Wolf
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Oh, I loved this one, Vicky.  Wonderfully put.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Oh Vicky!
You have outdone yourself again!  Can you do no wrong?  LOL  I love it!  Gave me goosy bumps all over the place!
Love ya
Cindi
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Wonderful!

Jon
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This is a beautifully penned rictameter Vicky

Enjoyed.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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