Open Poetry #16 |
For Startime . . . Chlng response #7 . . . Dancing in moonlight |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Dancing in moonlight The rise and fall of a waltz Circling left then right ~*~ stars shine upon us my eyes never leaving hers lost in their beauty ~*~ I’m slowly drawn in Drawn to her sweet ruby lips Electricity ~*~ then the music stops slowly we walk hand in hand into the garden ~*~ we sit on the bench surrounded by rose bushes she looks in my eyes ~*~ again our lips meet softly at first then with need I pull her closer ~*~ her body leaning pressing hungrily to mine we slide off the bench ~*~ I am mortified the thorns are unforgiving alas, so is she Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-31-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH NO!!! Not again! My you are quite accident prone aren't you? Perhaps she will forgive you in time....tee hee. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehehe, you have the worst luck sir! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly* if your kisses are as good as your writing I would have no problem forgiving you. I LOVE IT.....THANK YOU VERY MUCH. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You are having some real problems, hm? Ha Ha, good one, once again. Sandra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh dear, even the moonlight isn't giving you an equal chance. But, this is well written anyway. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"again our lips meet softly at first then with need I pull her closer" sigh (jealous, jealous, jealous) |
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LoveLetters Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 35State of Hope |
Cute this is! So many women, so many passionate words. Tell me, are you going to write for them all, or is there a list? WOnderful. I've been following your series..just not replying. Love has many masks. I am but one of them. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Poor Startime, all that passion, all that romance, then what does she get??? He runs away cause of a few thorns???? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You have so much bad luck. But, I think she will forgive you. |
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