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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-31 11:53 AM



Lady of Shallot
how I honor her presence
as it honors me
~*~
she has said before
she thinks me a nice fellow
I think she’s nice too
~*~
one fine day we met
‘tis good she cannot read minds
my eyes undressed her
~*~
we talked and I looked
and we agreed to picnic
I should call at ten
~*~
as I drove westward
our hips continued to brush
and she held my arm
~*~
alighting the coach
I brought her face close to mine
Stealing a quick kiss
~*~
I was unprepared
as she wrapped arms ‘round my neck
together we fell
~*~
she landed on top
I cushioned the fall nicely
Lips never parting
~*~
her breasts urged me on
softly pressing home her need
then the horse bolted


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-31-2001).]

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-10-31 11:56 AM



I think I shall steer clear of your coach.  It sounds like quite the den of iniquity...

but I shall read your poems, nevertheless...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-10-31 12:03 PM


Ah Interloper!  What luck you are having..tee hee..Gee, I'm so sorry!   Does this happen to you often?  Sure seems like it.  Carry on........

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

SmittenKitten
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3 posted 2001-10-31 12:31 PM


Hehe, foiled again!  Keep at 'er

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

The Lady of Shallot
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4 posted 2001-10-31 12:52 PM





Ah, but I am also Lady Godiva!
always carrying sugar
one lump
a lady has to be prepared!

To soothe the savage beast
and let the other one whinney!
quite the whimper
turn his thoughts to hay
(the horses' not yours)

as we continue on our checkered spread
forget the ants!

forget the fried chicken!
uncork the wine
and pour it all over me!

You need no paper cup,
for I will hold everything you
have to offer!
                          

(thanks, this was nice, I didn’t think anything could
make me smile today, but this did it!)


-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-


[This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-31-2001).]

Nightshade
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just out of reach
5 posted 2001-10-31 01:17 PM


Interloper - Oh dear, not again, close, but no cigar. lol. Good one. Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Startime
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6 posted 2001-10-31 01:50 PM


Oh my......you do tend to have bad luck at the most inconvient times. Never give up...on of these days you will really connect.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

catalinamoon
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7 posted 2001-10-31 02:58 PM


This was another good one, like all of your stuff, some lucky lady is very happy with you, I think.
Sandra

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with you
8 posted 2001-10-31 06:00 PM


my goodness.....whew...like this....very nice  
rwood
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9 posted 2001-11-01 06:39 AM


Your agility is showing! What's wrong with a little roll in the dirt? LOL! You are too much.

Sincerely,
Regina

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10 posted 2001-11-01 04:39 PM


LOL! This is funny!
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