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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-31 08:37 AM


What now to do with this passion
just revived, and then turned away.
Where to go, while waiting again
for a chance to see light of day.

A box, keeping safely inside
away from the daily despair?
Perhaps paper, now its' lone space
live in words until someone cares.

Where now to place heart full of love?
Pretend it was never alive?
Goodbye, twas nice but now over
Yet smiling, carry on, survive..

There's a corner in which to hide
put passion and love out of sight
But who really wants to go there,
Lying lonely in tears each night?



© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
The Lady of Shallot
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1 posted 2001-10-31 08:44 AM


Sandra,

(((hugs))))  keep writing!  Don't ever stop!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2001-10-31 09:17 AM


Oh, I just love to read your poems. This is very good.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2001-10-31 09:25 AM


Cat,
The tears of today are the lights of tomorrow
Enjoyed.

Startime
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4 posted 2001-10-31 09:32 AM


Write it out, dear one, until the time that love again lights up your heart. ***hugs***

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SpitFire
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5 posted 2001-10-31 09:46 AM


~Sandra,...please know that I'm reading you. Reading every emotive word you post. *Peace for your heart.
Amber Dawn
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6 posted 2001-10-31 10:17 AM


Emotions expressed very well.  And one we all struggle with at one time or another.  I compliment you on the subject and the writing of it.  
Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2001-10-31 10:23 AM




(big huggssssssss) Oh Sandra, my heart goes out to you, and I pray with all my heart that love comes to your heart very soon! (sad sigh) Write how you feel, sweet friend, then embrace the joy that follows when you hear the angels singing of love to you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana
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8 posted 2001-10-31 11:02 AM


nice
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-10-31 01:02 PM


And yet we must go there...because love does not always work out as we wish and we need to work through our disappointments and gather our strength to go on...for even though today is full of sorrow we can still have hope for tomorrow...James
Larry C
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10 posted 2001-10-31 09:19 PM


Catalinamoon,
I know how to relate to this one. I put those feelings in a shoe box. Nicely expressed.  

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either.  larry c

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2001-10-31 09:36 PM


Sandra...chin up love!     Everything is going to be okay.  It will be you know that...deep inside, I know you feel it.
~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Robert A
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12 posted 2001-11-01 01:24 PM


your screen name is lovely and so is this poem, it's a very real feeling.  I enjoyed
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