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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-10-30 09:36 PM




Blue Moon Coming

now seasonal time
bringing forth lunatics rhyme
blue moon coming soon

mist gray shrouding light
still moon guides my way tonight
paths hear footsteps fall

rustling leaves guiding
shadows are not so fright’ning
blue moon takes me far

image courtesy of: skypub.com



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-10-30 09:43 PM


Once in a Blue Moon
Forever in the making
The cycle of life

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2 posted 2001-10-30 09:52 PM


Karilea~
This is beautiful ... and the 'luna-lover' in me feels the pull~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2001-10-30 10:45 PM


Very soft and pleasing read Sunshine. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2001-10-30 10:51 PM


Karilea, Love the moon, the pic and best of all the poem!  ~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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5 posted 2001-10-30 10:57 PM


beautiful lines, so lyrical, so lovely...... awesome photo..... fabulous presentation

ahhhhhhhhh........ you took me there......

(but i need to go back to take photos of the beautiful fountains and painted cows)

wonderful work, my friend

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6 posted 2001-10-30 11:23 PM


ahhh...but the moons light exisits only from the sunshines reflected glow  

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

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7 posted 2001-10-31 09:52 AM


yes the moon is blue
no one reads lunatic's work
I fear an eclipse
you can write for lunatic
your words are much prettier

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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8 posted 2001-10-31 10:06 AM


Very nicely done!  
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9 posted 2001-10-31 10:11 AM


I love the picture with the poem. The poem was certainly well written and a wonderful read.  Wanda
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10 posted 2001-10-31 10:35 AM


"Blue moon,
you knew just what I was there for
you heard me say a prayer for
someone I really do care for"

Thanks for reminding me!

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11 posted 2001-10-31 11:17 AM


Blue moon tune. Smiling at Martie's reply, as I remember this song very well.
A nice poem, and I agree, the moon is a wonderful guide through the wilderness night.

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12 posted 2001-10-31 11:54 AM


Ahhh, Sis, you keep outdoing yourself. Very lovely...very gentle smile
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13 posted 2001-10-31 12:08 PM


I'm going to go away with that moon...
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14 posted 2001-10-31 03:05 PM


Look at you!  This presentation is spectacular.  The whole package is stunning!

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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15 posted 2001-10-31 05:59 PM


This was absolutely beautiful!
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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16 posted 2001-11-12 02:00 PM



It was my joy to find the words for this piece...thank you all for reading!

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