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if I was where. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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so, here I am again right where I should have been where I was when I wasn’t where I ought to be for the first time I’m not sure where I haven’t been when I wasn’t who I should be when they weren’t now, the last time I was where I am to be who I have been where I thought I couldn’t have but, if I wasn’t there I couldn’t have even been why that was because if I was where I should have been and not where I was I would have never possibly been here and then, I would have never met you -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
In the right place at the right time huh Sven? Good one. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well. This just whooshed right by my eyes, it fell down the page so well.... |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
says a ton, boy does it ever! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounding a little lost, like me, up till the end. I love happy endings. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh my gosh, I know how confusing it must be to put it in words, but yet the feeling is so sweet and simple! (smiles) BRAVO!!! I LOVE HOW YOU WRITE!!! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Awwwwww!  I love happily ever after!I like your style in this, it's very effective Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I'm glad I was here, and still am, I really love this one, I love these words. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Nightshade, you could put it that way. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, thank you my friend, I was going for that "whoosh" thing. . . Lady, that's me, I'm long-winded. . . LOL thank you. . . Sandra, I'm good at those. . . thank you my friend. . . vandana, thank you my friend. . . Noah, thank you for reading. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed it. . . Melissa, just thought that I'd try something new. . . you know me. . . walker, thank you. . . this one was for fun. . . glad that you liked. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well Sven..this was a fun read of a fun write...So..tell me....where is it you should have been? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
All the journeying was worth the haul, if you come out of it with one special friend, or special love..... And I must add I love the happy endings most too.... Isis |
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