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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2001-10-30 12:36 PM



Cold stone,
Feeling it’s touch,
Chilling the last of flames,
Soothing my wants to be at all,
Chill me.

Chill me,
Not wanting much,
Rid of lingering pains,
As I wait for the curtain’s call,
Darkness.

Darkness,
Hides the feeling,
Tears in wrinkled cheeks flow,
Drying on feverish canvas,
Of skin.

Of skin,
Slowly peeling,
Fears within layers show,
Under the smoldering black ash,
Cold stone


Gloom


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-10-30 01:03 PM


Cool comfort of stone on a blazing day.
Stone path to help me find my way.
Chilling juxtaposition,
warm feet and cold stone.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-31-2001).]

The Lady of Shallot
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2 posted 2001-10-31 08:51 AM


I was sitting here writing about warmth and making love!  This woke me up!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2001-11-06 04:06 AM


yep....that's what it is...cold stone...love ya m'gloom!
Professor Gloom
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4 posted 2001-11-06 08:12 AM


Thank you, Midnitesun,
There’s a feeling that rises from the feet,
When early morning warm and cold stone meet,
Contrast of sensations that start a day
Warmth of light as the cold dark night gives way.

Thank you, Lady of Shallot,
Stay warm, in body and soul.

Thank you, serenity,
Your words are like you, very kind.
This had dropped so quickly I’d almost forgotten about it,
But I guess it’s expected of Cold Stone.

Gloom

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