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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-10-30 11:17 AM

There was a time,
Thinking ,there would be
someone (Like you)
Would give me happiness
and joy In my life,
Now I found myself
In a pouring rain,
There were you,
Standing in an open arms,
you and I shared this love,
By this rain,
All over us,
Now I realise Isn't like you,
to love me again,
There Is no one (like you)
who can give me such love,
There Is no one around(like you)
Giving this sweet love
And shine away my eyes,
with this light,
behind the shower of a pouring rain
There Is no one (like you)
to give me happiness
and joy In my life,
No one (like you)

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 10-30-2001).]

Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

1 posted 2001-10-30 11:59 AM

Such beautifully written feelings. I am truly touched by this. *SMILE* Good work!

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-10-30 03:48 PM

You have expressed love very well...Someone
should be very lucky to have another person
that has such strong feelings in a good way.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-10-30 03:52 PM

Yes sometimes we wonder where a person has been all of our lives...James

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2001-10-30 03:52 PM

Very well expressed. Enjoyed !! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-10-30 05:09 PM

Aww. Very sweet.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-10-30 07:44 PM

you're getting better with these my friend. . . (I like) the parentheses. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-10-30 07:47 PM

Love this....I sure do! ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-10-30 08:36 PM

Lovely writing, Vandana. Enjoyed!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2001-10-30 09:04 PM

I enjoyed your love in the rain memory.

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