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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-10-30 11:16 AM

You whisper words of
passion softly in my
ear as I become lost in
your desire.
You search deeply into my
being as I become lost
in your soul.
You hold me tightly and
we dance as I become lost
in your heart sounds.
You take me away to
another place as I become
lost in your touch.
You are my every breath
as I become lost......
in your love.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2001-10-30 11:36 AM

I came here to passions for I felt a little lost .... my first read was this piece as if I was drawn to it. I can now turn towards the things that need me today with out a worry for I found what it was I had lost.
Very touching piece, thank you for the pleasurable read.

Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

2 posted 2001-10-30 11:53 AM

Exquisite. You captured this feeling so, so well. *BIG SMILE*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-10-30 12:55 PM

Love, a great place to get lost.
Thanks for this gentle poem, Gentle Spirit.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2001-10-30 11:07 PM

GS,
this was a beautiful poem! Love is
such a wonderful feeling isn't it

Just stunning work!
take care.
amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-10-30 11:29 PM

You hold me tightly and
we dance as I become lost
in your heart sounds.
You take me away to
another place as I become
lost in your touch.
You are my every breath
as I become lost......
in your love.
============================

youre not lost..youre in Heaven

and this poem...is a *sigh* waiting to happen
very beautiful GS

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2001-11-01 08:23 AM

My time so limited today, but I do want to thank you all so much. You touch me with your kindness. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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