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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-30 11:09 AM



you want a duet
so I lend my baritone
and we sing of love
~*~
peering in your eyes
my song is lost in their depths
my throat becomes dry
~*~
slowly my arm moves
encircling your waist strongly
drawing you closer
~*~
first hesitantly
breathing upon each other
your soft lips brush mine
~*~
tingling to my toes
I feel your trembling softness
the Pastor arrives

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Since I can only post three a day, and this is number three, this will take a while    


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-30-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2001-10-30 11:57 AM


Hmmm...been away a few days and see what's happened.  Seems I've got alot of catching up to do.  Great series you've got going on here, Interloper, Tracey will love this.
catalinamoon
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2 posted 2001-10-30 12:08 PM


Hi, I like this, real soft and sensual. Can you tell me about this challenge thing, what exactly are we up to, I missed something somewhere. LOL No surprise there.
Sandra

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3 posted 2001-10-30 12:14 PM


Duncan ~
Thanks for the visit, and welcome back.

Catalinamoon ~
Look at the work I did for Doreen.  The challenge was made there in the comments  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-30-2001).]

Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-10-30 12:29 PM


OH MY!!  Do I get one too????  This will take you forever at three a day!  But...I'm sure you are worth the wait.  

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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Gaia
5 posted 2001-10-30 12:34 PM


Interloper, this is great. You do have a very long list here, ya know, as Enchantres just reminded you.
Tracey should be beaming about now.

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6 posted 2001-10-30 12:39 PM


Oh Interloper,

Seems you've got yourself into a mess. Really glad you like to write romantic poetry cause you've got all the ladies here at Passions very passionately waiting for their poem. LOL.
                               Dawn

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just out of reach
7 posted 2001-10-30 01:16 PM


Interloper - Don't worry about it taking time......that's right..take your time......take..your...oooooh...yes....time. Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Tracey
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8 posted 2001-10-30 09:08 PM


Good gracious me what’s this I find?
The Long Tall Texan left a poem behind
What is it here? What’s this I see
He penned a poem specially for me
And oh what hearts, and oh what grace
I’m gonna show this off all over the place
You Texan boys do sure have style
This challenge will take you quite a while

Interloper, you certainly know how to rise to a challenge. You are going to be one very busy man penning such wonderful words to all us ladies here.

And ladies,  I THINK MINE’S BEST!!!! LOL

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmittenKitten
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9 posted 2001-10-31 02:18 AM



Interloper~   you've done it again!  Hehehe...I'm so sorry to have gotten you into this...but look at what smiles you've spread across the forum!  Perhaps you can get some of the other gents in the house to help you out    

Hugs,
~Krista

P.S. Tracey~ *I* got to sit on his lap!  


Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 10-31-2001).]

rwood
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10 posted 2001-10-31 06:55 AM


Hey! You cutting the rug with the ladies in here? You are doing it so very skillfully! I'd say you are in the spotlight baby!

Sincerely,
Regina

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11 posted 2001-10-31 10:35 AM


I am getting real tired.  I've got to save my energy for when there is no interruption, should that ever happen  

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-31-2001).]

SmartChick
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12 posted 2001-11-01 05:07 PM


I like this. Very interesting.
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with you
13 posted 2001-11-01 06:55 PM


I will wait patiently for my turn  
I'm thinking your dance card it pretty full though......

Startime
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14 posted 2001-11-01 07:19 PM


*giggling* shoot how could I have missed this treasure. Write on and sing us you romantically silly tunes.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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