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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-30 10:55 AM


Mysteria dreams
of a flower filled meadow
and a willow tree
~*~
I bend over her
whispering softly in ear
she naps in my arms
~*~
softly kissed forehead
peck on the nose, eyes open
warm lips reach for mine
~*~
the sweet warm embrace
fuels fires of passion withheld
trembling we explore
~*~
deep sounds in your throat
serve to heighten our ardor
when the lightening strikes

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-10-30 10:55 AM



Yikes.

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-30 10:57 AM


*sigh* I don't know how many of these I can read. Oh gosh she will swoon from your gentle but passion filled words.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-10-30 12:34 PM


Oh my!  I am sure you can do more than three women in one day! Oh....sorry, I meant, write a poem for more than three women in one day!  

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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4 posted 2001-10-30 12:37 PM


LOL! I thought I had a good reply 'till I read what Enchantress wrote....I'll leave it at that.
Mysteria, I can see your warm smile all the way up here.

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just out of reach
5 posted 2001-10-30 01:13 PM


Mmmmmm, lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2001-10-30 01:15 PM


Hehe  
This is crazy.  
*jealous*

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

catalinamoon
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7 posted 2001-10-30 02:27 PM


Ok, now I know this is really going to be a fun series. Delicious one here, sir.
andra

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8 posted 2001-10-30 03:26 PM


Wow!           Is this for me?

Interloper you have NO idea how much I needed this.  Not only was this a simply beautiful poem that would make a woman's heart sing, but you actually succeeded in making my mind drift off under that willow tree, but seeing this is a family site, I better not tell you what happened there.        Thank you for this poem - gee, what else do you do on request? LOL!  

Now, now ladies,          I meant as in songs!  

Thanks again, this was simply lovely, and I have saved it for a rainy day!         

p.s. ~  Oh my, I got so excited I forgot to say Sir, that you rose to the challenge, hehe!  Who is now up next?

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 10-30-2001).]

walker
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9 posted 2001-10-30 06:56 PM


This is beautiful, continue on..
Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2001-10-30 09:14 PM


Beautiful Interloper ... I haven't had time to respond to all, but I've been reading each and every wonderful Senryu ... well done!  Loved Sharon's response, LOL ...  

Best wishes,
/Kit

SmittenKitten
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11 posted 2001-10-31 01:46 AM



Interloper~ Hehe, man!  You sure don't take a challenge lightly do you?    Well you are more than up to the task in my opinion!  This is beautiful and so perfect for Mysteria.  

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2001-10-31 02:33 AM


You're writing a poem to every woman in Passions??????

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW

Great job

Titia

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Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

rwood
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13 posted 2001-10-31 06:57 AM


"Sigh"...........again.......okay....You win whatever challenge there is!

Sincerely,
Regina

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14 posted 2001-10-31 08:49 AM


Don't forget me (this is lovely, by the way) I could use something right about now    

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

SmartChick
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15 posted 2001-10-31 08:55 AM


Awww! This is so sweet and romantic. I know she is just going to love it. This is a very good poem.
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with you
16 posted 2001-10-31 06:05 PM


and again you melt my heart, with mushies for another gal  
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