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Lucie
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0 posted 2001-10-30 08:44 AM


The Lady of Shallot's no player
in this game of poetic pokin.
She claims she can't do it herself
'cause her poker seems to be broken.

And midnitesun's just a spectator,
and cheers me from on the sidelines.
Proffesor Gloom thinks me evil
for making fun of the men's minds.

Interloper's the smartest I've seen
for not getting into the fray.
He knows that I'll be the victor
and he's staying out of the way.

Poor Larry thinks he can beat me,
don't know what mess into he's gotten.
Teach him he's just a babe here,
send'em off with a swat on his bottom.

You all are enjoying the jousting
you laugh at the progress with glee.
I can't wait to see if you still laugh
when you find its YOU jousting with me.


© Copyright 2001 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-10-30 08:45 AM



ROTF...

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-30 09:27 AM


*giggling* oops

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Lady of Shallot
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3 posted 2001-10-30 10:34 AM


ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!

I love your sense of humor.  This is for you.....and I play, sometimes, when the
jokers aren't wild    



-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

[This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-30-2001).]

Lucie
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4 posted 2001-10-30 10:39 AM


ahhh Lady of Shallot.. I love the picture.. how did you know that she's my idol.. My mother named me well!!!

With perseverance even the snail reached the Ark.


Larry C
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5 posted 2001-10-30 09:41 PM


Mom,
Lucie hurt my feelings!  

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 10-30-2001).]

Balladeer
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6 posted 2001-10-30 11:55 PM


Hey, Lucie, you're the queen, no doubt
For coming back I thank you
Be sure your words don't come at me..
I don't wanna have to spank you!  

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2001-10-31 12:28 PM


LOL, Lucie , you are a card. Yes, I'm a happy spectator these days, having fun watching these scenes as they develop.
Now Larry, he's not one to give up too easily. I heard he spends most of his waking hours trying to catch you off guard.
But you tease with such ease you've got him down on his knees, beggin
"Please, please,
be gentle Lucie".

SmittenKitten
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8 posted 2001-10-31 11:35 AM



Hehe, yikes!  
I'd rather be on your side than against you that's for sure!  I feel bad for poor Larry, you'll have him yelling 'mercy' in no time!

  I'm loving this.

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Interloper
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9 posted 2001-11-01 06:04 PM


Shux, if Balladeer won't spank you I will

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