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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-10-30 06:28 AM


Dream Makers

Moon of enchantment and star of delight
Shine on a slumbering dreamer tonight
Cast honey beams from the night skies abive
Ethereal splendid dream makers of love

Spread out your blanket of opal white sheen
Over the hillsides, the field and the stream
Rapture the eyes of my loved one afar
Creamy round moon and white glittering star

Glow opalescence through windows of dawn
Make him a dream of a love that was gone
Radiate passion and bliss to his heart
Of love still alive, but a life far apart

Dream makers, love makers, glowing afar
Moon of enchantment and crystalline star
Bathe him in tenderness, let memories creep
As dawn’s purple rim slowly wakes him from sleep

Surely a dream made from stardust and moon
Will make my sweet dreamer come back to me soon

Elizabeth Santos

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Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-10-30 06:33 AM


yes, to come back to me soon..beautiful, Elizabeth, so comforting.

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2001-10-30 06:45 AM


"Glow opalescence through windows of dawn
Make him a dream of a love that was gone
Radiate passion and bliss to his heart
Of love still alive, but a life far apart"

This is a wonderfully magical piece Liz ... beautifully flowing and descriptive!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2001-10-30 08:08 AM


Ah! The pleasing images that this one brings... such a sensory ride...

Thanks for sharing,
Many regards,
Sudhir

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