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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 10-30-2001 12:13 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

Whispers
I see their reflection
In vibrant colors,
In painted clouds
In fall leaves dancing
On roaring winds
In clock towers
That chime daily faces,
In fragments of music strummed gently,
Unreachable to my fingers yet
My eyes begin to softly cry
Look deeply into the
Emerald world
They reveal what you seek,  
Found in
Secret places of the heart
The one only you know
When the wind speaks listen
The best time, early morning
Before the mist rises,
You live in my embrace,
In my vision of beauty,  
On the wings of angels
In captured images
I no longer can find,
How long can we keep our rapture?
Feel this,
Touch the silent water
In early dusk
And consume the brilliance
Of sunsets golden streams and lavender hue
When life was innocent
And I call to you
Come back, and listen
Return to time

Still

Move closer
Touch the water
Remember
I have loved you beyond time
Stir it slowly
You are part of it
You live within my embrace

~~
*****


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-30-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
SmittenKitten
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where the sky and horizon meet


1 posted 10-30-2001 12:52 AM       View Profile for SmittenKitten   Email SmittenKitten   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmittenKitten's Home Page   View IP for SmittenKitten


"When the wind speaks listen
The best time, early morning
Before the mist rises"


I love those thoughts...nature has so much to say, we just have to listen.

You have laid out a beautiful procession of thoughts..each one filled with vivid imagery and a flow so soft and gentle that it's almost like a whisper on the wind

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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2 posted 10-30-2001 01:03 AM       View Profile for DawnG   Email DawnG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DawnG

Nature, amazing isn't it? So many ways it speaks to our souls without saying words. Enjoyed this write a great deal.  
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3 posted 10-30-2001 01:39 AM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Beautiful imagery and whispers of love.

"Touch the silent water
In early dusk
And consume the brilliance
Of sunsets golden streams and lavender hue
When life was innocent
And I call to you
Come back, and listen
Return to time"

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4 posted 10-30-2001 01:59 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Greeneyes,
Images from a place where we like to be applied to a place where we long to be! Nicely done.  

Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either.  larry c

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5 posted 10-30-2001 06:24 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Lauren, your heart you pour out through your words dear one.  I have the feeling that this one is very special to you.......as it should be.  Wonderful written emotion.  Be well friend.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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6 posted 10-30-2001 06:34 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

The title lured me in to an enchanting love poem
Very, very beautiful verse full of lovely phrases
Liz
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7 posted 10-30-2001 06:36 AM       View Profile for The Lady of Shallot   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit The Lady of Shallot's Home Page   View IP for The Lady of Shallot

I felt this was being read to me, what a great feeling...and thank you for signing my guestbook, I appreciate it!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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8 posted 10-30-2001 07:22 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Lovely write, Lauren.  Beautiful images.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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9 posted 10-30-2001 08:34 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

In fragments of music strummed gently,
Unreachable to my fingers yet
My eyes begin to softly cry
Look deeply into the
Emerald world
They reveal what you seek,  
Found in
Secret places of the heart
The one only you know
When the wind speaks listen
The best time, early morning
Before the mist rises,
You live in my embrace,
In my vision of beauty,
  
=================================

Feel this,
Touch the silent water
In early dusk
And consume the brilliance
Of sunsets golden streams and lavender hue
When life was innocent
And I call to you
Come back, and listen
Return to time

Still

Move closer
Touch the water
Remember
I have loved you beyond time
Stir it slowly
You are part of it
You live within my embrace

===============================

time and time again ...you write my heart...
god this is so damn beautiful L.
and it showcases your gift of pen to write such softly stunning images that float down to the reader and carry them away to a place of inner peace in your whispers.
exquisite my friend...absolutely emerald-enchanting  
me

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

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10 posted 10-30-2001 07:47 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

you play these images so well. . . I'm constantly amazed. . .

superb. . . beautiful. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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Somewhere in time~


11 posted 10-30-2001 07:50 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Lauren~This is exquisite!  I adore it!  Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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By the sea


12 posted 10-31-2001 11:03 AM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

"Touch the silent water
In early dusk
And consume the brilliance
Of sunsets golden streams and lavender hue"

I wish I had written these lines.  Just lovely, Lauren.   *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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13 posted 11-02-2001 12:42 PM       View Profile for Robert A   Email Robert A   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert A

I'm a music lover from way back....thanks for the memories
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By the Seaside


14 posted 11-02-2001 01:40 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Such soft and romantic music
you're writing Greeneyes~
  
Brings to mind the song from
'My Fair Lady'

I could have spread my wings and done a thousands things I've never done before.
I'll never know what made it so exciting, when all at once my heart took flight~~~

I ooooonly know when he began to dance with me, I could have danced, danced, danced
all night!!  ha!!  

Now see what you've started?  

  
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In the winds of Cherokee song


15 posted 11-05-2001 06:57 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

There are those that write of the heart and then there are those that make us see and feel what is in their heart through their pen and the later would be you. Wonderful verse filled with the power and magic of love that only a heart that understands could spill forth.  Truely a splendid piece of work.
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16 posted 11-05-2001 10:06 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


This is so softly beautiful with fantastic imagery ~ you have a rare talent for writing about nature and love  

It's a keeper

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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17 posted 11-06-2001 02:00 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Thanks to all that read and responded...I appreciate your words, comments, and thoughts very much....it makes writing and posting here worth it....sorry it took me so long to get back, we had a death in the family, and I needed/need to be with them right now....

peace and love to all...be well be safe...


always

Greeneyes~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-06-2001).]

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18 posted 04-09-2002 02:06 AM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Lauren,

    Again just beautiful. I'm so glad I FINALLY started to pay attention and read your words

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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displaced


19 posted 01-20-2003 04:23 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very soft and sensual...good write
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