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Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you

0 posted 2001-10-30 02:49 PM


My heart longs to speak the words
That my mouth cannot say.
Words of love for you
That can’t be taken away.

Words that are full of life
From a heart that knows love.
Words that are indeed sweeter
Than sung by angels above.

But for now, my Juliet,
I hide within these words.
Until the day you know
My heart’s voice, not yet heard.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

© Copyright 2001 Moonlight Romeo - All Rights Reserved
Robert A
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1 posted 2001-10-30 03:01 PM


never goes out of style does it, hope she hears you!
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2 posted 2001-10-30 03:30 PM


Moonlight Romeo - enjoyed this heartfelt piece. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2001-10-30 04:19 PM


Only when love bares it's heart and soul do we truly feel.... and yet those same feelings can leave us vulnerable.  

Your poetry is very pretty Romeo.    



Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-10-30 08:41 PM


Romantic and sweet, Romeo.  May she return your love one day.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-10-30 10:13 PM


My heart longs to speak the words
That my mouth cannot say.
Words of love for you
That can’t be taken away.
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thus is the gift of poetry...to pen the words one wishes to express but may not be able to face to face...
lovely classic romantic poetry here Romeo..
wonderful cadence...this was a pleasure to read aloud
well done poet sir  

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
6 posted 2001-10-31 12:13 PM


Robert A, thank you.  I hope she does as well.

Nightshade, thank you for reading.

Blues Serenade, only when we show those will we know love.  Thank you.

Lone Wolf, I share that wish with you.  Thank you.

Janet Marie, thank you for reading.  It is the gift that I have, I only hope that one day, I can share my words with the one that I love.  Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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7 posted 2001-10-31 06:35 PM


You are wrong in one aspect of this at least. Your heart has indeed been heard now that you've penned these words here. Its wonderful to see you here, Romeo. May your Juliet find your beautiful words.  

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Startime
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8 posted 2001-10-31 07:17 PM


*sigh* I hope you can too. Your words are beautiful and tender. She cannot help but see the love that flows from your pen. I love this poem.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
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9 posted 2001-10-31 10:13 PM


This is lovely. I hope you get to show her your hearts voice. A heart is a terrible thing to waste. Sometimes, it is so difficult to express the feeling though. Beautiful poem

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

SmartChick
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10 posted 2001-10-31 10:54 PM


This is a lovely poem. I just love it.
Enchantress
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11 posted 2001-10-31 11:01 PM


BEAUTIFUL!!!

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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