Loves Sweet Sorrow concl. Embracing The Light Within

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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0 posted 2001-10-29 02:59 PM

Ths sun filtered through the ivory curtains
bringing with it a brand new day
and she awoke with a sense of peace
a new resolution now lighting her way.

Inside she felt a certain sort of calmness
no longer was she afraid to face the light
but rather she reached out to embrace it
her visions now clearly within her sight.

She felt her strength abounding
knowing not from whence it came
but she knew from this day forward
she would never be the same.

She strolled past the blooming orchards
to sit in her favorite wicker chair
no tears were falling from the willows
or from this lady, oh so fair.

She had made peace with herself
awaiting the coming of each 'morrow
for she had finally released the pain
that once held her in loves sweet sorrow.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-29-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-10-29 03:04 PM

BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!! Oh Donna, I'm so so happy she rid herself of her pain, and soon with her new hope she will find true love to last forever! (smiles) THIS IS BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-10-29 03:11 PM

Beautiful words and a magnificant moment in your life...James

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-10-29 08:01 PM

She had made peace with herself
awaiting the coming of each 'morrow
for she had finally released the pain
that once held her in loves sweet sorrow.

Bravo! To make peace in our hearts that life does indeed go on seems like the Grand Canyon of a step. A wonderful heartfilled story that rings so true for each of us...but never so eloquently it seems. and so glad a beautiful ending. Fantastic muse my lady!

Sincerely,
Regina

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-29 08:05 PM

BEAUTIFUL !! ~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2001-10-29 09:17 PM

This is just beautiful. I like it.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2001-10-30 06:22 AM

I am pleased that you all have enjoyed this little saga, and I thank you for going along for the ride. Thanks to all and hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

texasrose
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since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

7 posted 2001-10-30 09:18 AM

The bittersweet sorrow of love conquered by this delicate southern lady is just a perfect ending. Loved this. *s*

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-10-30 09:23 AM

GS..I have bookmarked this series, saving it so I can read them all in order...my time is limit here rigt now but I didnt want to miss these..I'll be reading them some quiet winters night

so glad to see your muse has returned

take care
jm

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-10-30 09:25 AM

Absolutely stunning. The vision of this whole series has be amazing and I have loved each one. Incredible writing, my friend.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

sigheyes
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since 2001-04-25

Posts 323
the winds of destiny

10 posted 2001-10-31 07:45 AM

This series was wonderful. Good to see a happy ending upon completion. I enjoyed this Gentle one.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2001-11-01 08:18 AM

And again, my thanks to you all. I enjoyed writing this, and am glad you enjoyed reading it. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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