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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-30 02:44 PM


Sometimes she feels rosy, blush of pink, unfolding petals
Others, a darkened violet, weeping late into the night.
Today she touches lillies in her mind, beauiful sad
Tomorrow, perhaps Carnations, with hope within her sight

Lilacs misty fragrance filling thoughts with childhood remains
Gardenia dreams soft scented, pass through gently now and then
Flourishing Orchid she can be, when given half a chance
Lately lavender feels better, more of a soothing friend.


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1 posted 2001-10-30 02:57 PM


well, this is a little flowery for a guy, but it's nice poetry, love those images and phrasing
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2 posted 2001-10-30 03:19 PM




(smiles) And when your sweet romeo sweeps you off your feet, he will fill the vase in your heart with so many roses and forget-me-nots and freesia! (smiles) I LOVE IT, IT"S SO BEAUTIFUL!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-10-30 07:42 PM


Excellent expressions Sandra....I loved the
flowery approach....Nicely done.

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4 posted 2001-10-30 07:43 PM


funny. . . I've always thought of her as orchids. . .  

great job Sandra. . .

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5 posted 2001-10-30 07:52 PM


Sandra...This is wonderfully done.  Enjoyed!

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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