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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-10-28 11:59 PM


Where Can You Be

I was pondering over
Lowly descending
Thoughts sinking
Was my muse ending

The end of a journey
How could this be
Nowhere thoughts
My muse leaving me

I search for sequels
A succeeding part
Some continuation
To a mind and heart

Tiresome, sameness
Relieve monotony
Spaces left blank
To fill with intimacy

Ideas to breathe in
Powers of insight
A muse to inspire
With ability to write

Harmony of minds
Too long apart
Return me hope
Words to my heart

The panorama view
Where all can see
I seek my muse
Where can you be

Hope ©2001


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-10-29 01:38 AM


Hope, have you looked in the reflecting pond?
When my muse hides from me, I have to go outside and shake a bush or two. When she falls down in front of me, I scoop her up and take her inside for the night. Next day, I have some poetry...or a least a verse or two.

The Rusty Knight
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2 posted 2001-10-29 02:49 AM



I hit dry spells when I wonder where my muse has gone, too.  Then from the strangest places ideas fill my head.  It is a small space so it does not take much *S*  Poetry is a delicate balance for me.  I have to push a little, but if I push too much it never comes out right.


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HopeS
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3 posted 2001-10-29 06:30 AM


Thanks Midnitesun ,
yes I gaze sunsets and starlight reflections
the muse and I soon make connections
Thanks again
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2001-10-29 06:31 AM


Thanks Rusty Knight for you kind reply
yes hopefully the drought will not last too
long
Hope

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