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Goodbye |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
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This is for a resident where I work…Roger. He is a great person.. one I’ve gotten to know. It is pretty definate that tonight will be his last. Part of me prays he holds on, while the other bids him a peaceful good-bye, wanting him escape his ever present pain. Anyway… I needed to get this out… so here it is. Good-bye I see your soul struggling To leave this world, be free Time has taken its toll On your aged body Your eyes knowingly watchful Your body simply waiting To take it’s last breath The life you lived The family you raised The work you did The love you gave All comes down to this God’s love calling you home I hold your hand Let you know I care So you know you aren’t alone Knowing the next time I am here you will not be My soul cries with loss That has not happened yet My heart says a silent goodbye As I stand to leave turning To look back one more time At the one I’ve been lucky Enough to call a friend Let God’s love cradle you Take you to your peaceful home Know that I will miss you And that you will not be forgotten Your memory embedded in my heart. [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
rosepetals25 - this is a lovely tribute. It is a calming thought to know that when we depart....we are really just going home.Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful and loving write Rose. He and you are both lucky to have each other. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Such a gentle soft goodbye. I hope you share this with his family. It is beautiful, kind, and full of love. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A beautiful and touching piece you have written for him. He must be a special person. I agree with Midnightsun, you should share this with his family If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Chris - I'm glad you liked it  Thank you for stopping in.Gentle Rose - I am lucky to know him. Thanks for stopping in. Midnitesun - Well, I see pictures haning in his room, but I've never seen his family unfortunately. Thank you for taking time to read. Tracey - Thank you for your kind words. He is a special person. He has a great sense of humor. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, Tara ~ you're going to make me cry  Well expressed, hun ~ from the heart! ~hugs~ it's just a sad fact of life, although, I wish that it wasn't~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Rosepetals, This is a truly beautiful dedication to him. I just wish along with others that there was a way to share this poem with his family. I know what a position you are in working in the nursing home, your told not to get close to the residents, but yet when you work that closely with a person it is impossible not to. Dawn |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa - *hugs* Thank you for your compliments. Yes death is a part of life.. I can't wait until I'm better at handling it... I suppose the day will come..someday. Dawn - Getting to know the residents.... that is the best and worst part of the job. I'm in activities... so I do alot of talking with them. I love my job... it is wonderful. But at times... like this.. it is sooo hard. I wouldn't trade it though... not for the world. Thank you for your comments. Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
big hugs, sweetie, BIG ones! You have a wonderful and such a tough job. Take care! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I am sorry for you loss, I hope you find peace in knowing he will go to a much better place....HUGS... Greeneyes~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-30-2001).] |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
What a lovely poem. I'm sure your friend was better off for having you care for him. I give you a lot of credit for letting yourself get close. My gram was in a nursing home, and while she had visitors, other residents did not, and I know that your comfort and love helped him. Take care and know that he will be at peace. [fontcolor=red]Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold[/font] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Tara, this is so so sad, I cried all throughout this sad but beautiful poem! (sigh) Roger will always love you, sweet friend, and he has a very loving heart that will make everyone proud always to know what a sweet and loving person he is, just like you! (wipes tears) His time may be coming, but he will always look down upon you smiling, and will always be happy to know how lucky he was to know such a beautiful and loving Tara who always shines with love! (big hugggssssss) Oh Tara, we all love you so mch! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, dearest of friends! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love an dlight always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How sweet, I bet you brightened up his last days so much. This is one reason why I could not work in such a setting. For a while I volunteered in a hospital, and an elderly lady there left such a mark on my heart, 20 years later I remember her name and face, though I only saw her twice. I'm glad there are sweethearts like you there for the old folks. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Little One, I wrote this the other day and posted it in Spiritual...perhaps you can use it and if not today...another time, perhaps... sending hugs to you...you do a very important job, more important than you know... do not call me back for I must go, you must stay it is not your time the ages I’ve seen are stories given to you share them from your heart leave the soul to fly wellness springs awaiting me leave me smile again when it is your time I shall greet you at the gate you will know me then let me go with peace in prayer warm hands take yours let Him comfort you |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I thought you were leaving the forum (whew) this is so sad and tender...God bless you -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write for a friend |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Wow.. Thank you everyone for responding.. your words are so sweet and kind. Roger did pass away.. last night. It hurts that he is gone... but I know he is in a better and happier place. And I know he wouldn't want me to greive his death but rejoice about his life. I could almost hear him yelling at me when the tears fell..*chuckles* Sunshine, your poem was wonderful.. I loved it. Thank you for sharing it with me. And The Lady of Shallot.. I could NEVER leave here. Everyone here is so kind... and supportive.. there is no way I could stay away to long . Thank you again for all your hugs and words of support. You don't know how much it means. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Your thoughts and actions are beautiful...James |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Tara, I know I've already replied to you once in this thread, but I was feeling the overwhelming need to give you a *hug* on the loss of your friend, Roger. My thoughts are with you at this difficult time. Dawn |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
 I can't imagine what it would be like to watch a friend die. But you are right, he is at peace now and with this poem he will live on. *hugs* to you.P.S. I think you handled this just fine. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James.. Thank you.  Dawn thank you for stopping back in. I never turn down a hug And Elizabeth... It is something I am gradually getting used to. Working in a nursing home it is part of the job. Every now and then one really touches deep. I am handling death much better. I try to remember that they have lived their whole lives.. and are returning home. Thank you for stopping in. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
again. . . another kind of "good-bye". . . but, the "hello" on the other end will be forever. . . wonderful Tara. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I know, some death hurt more than others. You have a beautiful yet difficult job. You've lost a friend, but regained a memory. Great poem, thanks for sharing Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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