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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 2001-10-28 06:57 PM


Hello Passions, I apologize for not coming back with a poem and all.....I just needed to feel right before I write or post something and now that I'm feeling fine about my creativity...now, may the rhymes flow.....enjoy!

Good morning America......

to a whole new world, our new home,
as we're stuck in this post-crisis syndrome
while the death rate escalates
as, the time of war, is soaring
as, huge, black, stratus clouds situate
above the world as, black rain is pouring....

Good afternoon....

as America and I, shall sing a mornful tune
for those who lost a loved one on that day in September
and to the heroes, your courageousness, we'll always remember
as Sept. 11th, has provided me with a deeper perspective on life
like, I know my existance, will be the best gift on christmas night.

Good evening....

I must reiterate that, I'm proud to be breathing
but, as I turn on the news, my conscious can't help but view
that, there maybe more to this situation than what meets the eye
like, what if the gov't, is combining half the truth with white lies?
And God forbid, if these anthrax attacks, are aided by an inside job
cause, if speculation becomes fact, then please help us God!

Goodnight.....

as the anthrax, is like, a plaque continuing to spread
til one, hundreds, and maybe thousands end up dead
and I can't help but think that, we played with fire and got burned
for sticking our noses&ears, in external affairs that wasn't our concern
as Osama and co. wants to hurt this, leave us out in the cold, shirtless
as, we're witnessing part of his scheme, to wipe us off the surface....

forcing us to retaliate, behind our superior, military force
while the fate of mankind, takes on a whole new course
as my concept for world peace, has been crush by hate, a deadly force
as my heart and soul echoes, deep sorrow and heavy remorse.

Good morning, good afternoon, good evening, and goodnight...
America, turning a tradegy into a war, is simply not right.
Good morning, good afternoon, goodnight and right back to dawn....
when the smoke clears, we'll finally see that, Satan has won.....

so america, I need your utmost attention, I need you to understand me....
remember that, no matter who wins the war, it's still a loss for humanity!

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 10-28-2001).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2001-10-28 07:01 PM


Nate.  Very very well expressed!!  An excellent write Sir poet.  Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

DawnG
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2 posted 2001-10-28 07:13 PM


Nate,

You sure have seemed to get a grasp on your creativity here. Great message you have placed upon us here.

                                  Dawn

RosePetal
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3 posted 2001-10-28 09:47 PM


Hey Nate!

I really love this. Your words flow so wonderfully my partner in rhyme , hehe
ohhh guess what? You have won the honor of receiving my 400th post! : )

Tracey
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4 posted 2001-10-28 09:52 PM


Wow, you hold so much to think about in this piece. Particularly the Goodnight portion. I have wondered some of these thoughts. I do not have the answers and I do not know the truth, but there is much to think about

so america, I need your utmost attention, I need you to understand me....
remember that, no matter who wins the war, it's still a loss for humanity!

And those are the most truthful words of all. Well written poem, and much to ponder

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-10-29 02:25 AM


Guess thats why they call it war...or an active hostility...
As the song goes...War...what is it good for...absolutely nothing...James

DYME
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since 2000-07-29
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6 posted 2001-11-04 12:00 PM


That was very touching.

I'm not crazy...I have papers to prove it!!

No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

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