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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I said nothing, stood silently by as she sauntered before my husband's eye to get his attention with engaging smile dishonoring my presence, all the while And he, libido and ego intact oblivious to feminine wars, infact he claimed it all an innocent act of friendship handled with the utmost tact She smirked with gleam in eyes, "hello" I fumed in silence, felt vertigo sauntered away without a "know" that death could come in just one blow his claims of innocence, merely token volcanic anger of truth unspoken add to statistics another home broken my pillows at night are now tear soakened filthy lover, filthy spy golden band trust, fake friend lies I promise them both 'til the day I die they'll never know who, but will know why... ~Tier 10/01 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tier~WOW!! Thems fightin words m'friend! Powerful and excellent write here. Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Tiersdin, I hope this is not a true to life written poem. If it is here's hoping that happiness will come your way again soon. Dawn |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hell hath no fury?? ah. . .but. . . yet. . . love hath no fury. . . well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow ~ this really is powerfully expressed, it hit me hard! I also hope that this isn't true to life for you  There's nothing more despicable than a friend who flirts with another's lover and for that lover to blindly succumb to such slyness! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent write....I could see the three of you standing there. the smirk on her face. His looking at you saying What????? in his eyes. Nail him..... Enjoyed this. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Nancy, Dawn, Sven, Melissa, and Magnus, Thank you all for reading and commenting on this poem. There's really no truth in this work at all, so please... don't worry. *hugs* ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Whew, I was glad to read the comment above to see that it's not true life. But a very well done poem. You wrote it very well and made the reader feel it did come from your heart. Very well pennned If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Wow...This is powerfully written. I am glad that this isnt happening to you. You penned it perfectly! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Tiersdin - What's that they say about a woman scorned? I liked this alot. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I was so glad to read that this is not true to life. It is a terrible pain for the women who do go through it and you have written of the anger and hurt extremely well. A magnificent piece of writing.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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