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janmew
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since 2001-10-27
Posts 134
Canada

0 posted 2001-10-28 03:52 PM


Sorry to re-post this so soon, I played with this one a little, adding a reply to the original.... tho the reply hasn't changed much from the original wording. I just wanted to see how it looked this way....


Would you lay with me in the fields of gold,
As the warm breeze kissed our hair?
Would you wrap me in your arms and hold,
til the sun was no longer there?

Would you comfort me while storm clouds rolled,
through days of ice and snow?
Would you gladly watch each season unfold
through happy times and woe?

Would you kiss me as the night grew cold,
while the time passed slowly by?
Would you Love me till we both grew old
with a Love too strong to die?

Yes I would lay with you in the fields of gold,
As the warm breeze kissed our hair.
I would  wrap you in my arms and hold,
til the sun was no longer there.

I would comfort you while storm clouds rolled,
through days of ice and snow.
I would gladly watch each season unfold
through happy times and woe.

I would kiss you as the night grew cold,
while the time passed slowly by.
I would Love you till we both grew old
for my  Love is too strong to die.

Poetry is an expression of feelings.  I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves.

© Copyright 2001 Jan - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2001-10-28 04:41 PM


Yes love should be enjoyed together watching the seasons rolling by...James
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