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kaile
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0 posted 10-28-2001 12:28 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kaile

A wild boar
was walking among humans

I exclaimed
"It's walking!"

Never get so affected
that all you do
is state the obvious

© Copyright 2001 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 10-28-2001 12:39 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Excellent advice, kaile!!  Nicely done.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Startime
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2 posted 10-28-2001 12:41 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

*giggling* oh my what an interesting thought. But the obvious remains to be that this is a great poem. BRAVO.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 10-28-2001 01:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Is this like the running of the bulls...alright state more then the obvious...what happened that wasn't so obvious...obviously some ran...James
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  ROFL!  you crack me up..!  

interesting thought..keep 'em comin'..!  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

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5 posted 10-28-2001 11:40 PM       View Profile for DawnG   Email DawnG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DawnG

LOL. This was very short, but enough to have me rolling around on the floor laughing. Thanks for the laugh.

                                   Dawn
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6 posted 11-24-2001 11:11 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

Haha Kaile, I could just imagine. Your mouth gaping wide, and your finger pointing at that wild boar... hahaha...
 
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