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{{{ Carnations.....& Secret Incantations}}}
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{{{ Carnations.....& Secret Incantations}}} |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
 I have been given carnations today I wonder what do they say? Do they speak of emotions hidden between the tiny folds of their hearts? Do their petals tell of a road and how it was taken from the start? Would those emotions last to the last? Or would they go away by the end of the day? A short story Unfinished Shorter than the red small petals Of a carnation Yet longer in misery Than the long leaves Ever standing In anticipation A red carnation And a yellow one Left on my desk….. Unnamed Untitled A silent token In a calm day Do they tell Of things that might Sweep away? Of a future unknown Untouched like the sunray? They say that red carnation Speak Of the suffering of the heart In its awesome peak A suffering more than We deem to know Does this red carnation say so?? And what does the yellow one say? That I want you here Near Alway? That my jealous heart Wants you to forever stay? Forever walk my way? Carnations Secret incantations Unnamed …. Untitled.... Messages hidden between The folds of the softly wrinkled petals Leaving the unspoken message to me Smaller? Or bigger than the sea?? That’s the enchanting mystery… ~*~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~*~ ~~ Thank you ~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh how absolutely beautiful. So much can be said with flowers and for you they leave you with questions of their meaning. This poem is one that shows the pondering of your heart. Stunning. I love it. You deserve to get flowers, my friend.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Perhaps the question is: "What do you hear?" ...or maybe: "What do you want to hear?" -MVS "Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melody, if I could, I would have sent them, as you so deserve much love and sweetness. This is a lovely poem, and thank you again for all your support lately, too. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is lovely and very much enjoyed today. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
messages unheard. . . and yet, spoken. . . this touches on many things. . . on many levels. . . well done my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Melody, This is very beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Dawn |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Startime~ And wonderful flowers to you too my friend, held with my heart-felt appreciation for your kind wonderful comment...  Thank you dearly... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mark~ My dear friend.... "What do I hear?" ...perhaps the roaring of the sea.... perhaps sounds within me..  "What do I want to hear?" I'm not sure......perhaps reflections of me Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sandra~ Oh, my dearest friend....I have recieved them and they are perfuming my room with their scent and the sweetness of the soul that gave them..... Thank you dearest.....and I wish I could send them to you too to make up your day. Take care.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Nancy~ Thank you so much. I'm glad that you have enjoyed it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sven~ "Messages unheard...and yet spoken" You heard them...didn't you? Thank you soooo much my friend.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Dawn~ Thank you so much for reading it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 10-28-2001).] |
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