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0 posted 2001-10-28 11:22 AM




Magic Of Kissing Senryu
By: Noah Eaton
10/28/01


Swimming On Satin

Swimming on satin
Resting a happy head down
Sighing in loves joy


Silk Thoughts

Two lovers kissing
For the first time in their lives
Fainting in rapture


Lovers Wish

That night you kissed me
I smile in bed, dreaming
To kiss you once more


Serendipity

Falling in her arms
When I least expected it
Kissing her dearly



© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-28 12:14 PM


Noah!  You are such a romantic!!  Now it's your 18th birthday and you can have all the girls kiss you!!  Beautiful write!  
Hugs, Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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2 posted 2001-10-28 12:14 PM


Noah, your heart always shines. Lovely words.
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3 posted 2001-10-28 12:38 PM


*sigh*So very romantic. Well done, Noah.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-10-28 12:41 PM


Breathtaking and romantic thoughts, Noah.  Nice work!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2001-10-28 01:06 PM


Noah,
Nice, enjoyed the read.

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6 posted 2001-10-28 03:00 PM


Wow to be 18 and be able to write like this.  

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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7 posted 2001-10-28 03:33 PM


Noah,

A big *kiss* for you on your 18th birthday. Sorry, I'd do a smilie, but I don't know how. LOL

                                     Dawn

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8 posted 2001-10-28 04:42 PM


Beautifully expressed, Noah! Lovely thoughts! Happy Birthday!  
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9 posted 2001-10-28 08:17 PM


~Happy Birthday, Noah!~

I love these senryus - how beautiful!  
You never cease to impress or move me!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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10 posted 2001-10-28 08:52 PM


Well now, who's a romantic soul on his birthday??? Beautiful Noah, and a big happy birthday kiss to you.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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11 posted 2001-10-28 09:04 PM


It seems like I have forgotten the power of a kiss. This gives me hope to find it again. I love this!  

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

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12 posted 2001-10-29 02:15 AM


These are nice...James
Domzi
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13 posted 2001-10-29 02:40 AM


I love reading your senyrus.
You are such a romantic!
Reading this one had me
thinking of all the magical
kisses that keep me wanting
more.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

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