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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-10-28 08:21 AM



Walk About

marine blue winds blow
leafing roads across my times
windows to my world

brilliant golds gilding
memories of years' past scenes
all that was to me

circles turn upon
one but with key to latch I
find my way again


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
The Rusty Knight
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1 posted 2001-10-28 08:34 AM


Sunshine,

This is one I have read several time and every time I see something new.  I like the feel of it and the way it makes you reread it and find the different things it says.  It is a short poem that has a lot of depth.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-10-28 09:57 AM


yes, once we find our way, that's the only key we need!

Kathleen
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"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-10-28 10:57 AM




(smiles) Such a beautiful poem about rites of passage! (sigh) I believe that we all will find our way as long as we follow our hearts and take our dreams to the extent while also admiring the simple beauty that surrounds us all! (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



DawnG
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4 posted 2001-10-28 04:32 PM


Sunshine,

So few words, so much depth. Great write.

                                    Dawn

Denise
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5 posted 2001-10-28 04:52 PM


A beautiful walk about, Karilea! Lovely!
Nan
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6 posted 2001-10-29 06:56 AM


Walking life's long road
Recall Streets of Memories
Step down Future's Way

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