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Flutterwings
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0 posted 2001-10-27 11:16 PM




Art by~ Josephine Wall

Shangri-la



Sleep,
per chance to envision wonders
you've desired in daydreams.

Slip away where fantasy dwells;
where young hearts go to dance
and risk looking foolish.

Embrace all your wishes
like a child at play;
dance atop daffodils
like butterflies in summer
and sip from nature's nectar.

Climb the tallest mountain
and soar with the eagles.
Tip-toe through  your daydreams
and make them come true.

Strum the golden harp;
embrace the rhytmic sunlight.

Ride whispering breezes
and land atop  pop-corn clouds;
sink into magical softness;
then slide down
the kaleidoscopic rainbow
into Shagri-la.
~~~~~~~~~******~~~~~~~~
By ~ Madeleine Armstrong



© Copyright 2001 Madeleine Armstrong - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-27 11:22 PM


I could use some of those popcorn clouds, and a slide down that rainbow would make my Saturday night complete (almost). of course, it sure would be lots more fun with a partner on the slide ride.  
Nan
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2 posted 2001-10-27 11:34 PM


Very nice and uplifting - I enjoyed this lots, Flutterwings..
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3 posted 2001-10-27 11:43 PM


If I drifted off to Shagri-la
I'll tell you what I wish to be and why.
I long for freedom in nature's arms,
So I'd be a beautiful butterfly!



Maggie, now you know I saved this one, it was absolutely beautiful,
"A Maggie Poem"!  Sending you love my friend.


~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 10-27-2001).]

Startime
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4 posted 2001-10-28 11:01 AM


I am very much a lover of fantasy so this beautiful poem filled my thirst for it. I was able to lose myself in a world of your making. I also love Josephine Wall's work and have used much of it on my site. BRAVO!!!This poem is a masterpiece. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Flutterwings
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5 posted 2001-10-28 02:27 PM


Hey! You guys thanks ever so much for the kind and loving comments... Let us all go bouncing on pop-corn clouds and tumble down the magical rainbow.... where we can swim together in the pot of love at the end....   Love you, Maggie ((~.~))


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6 posted 2001-10-28 04:28 PM


Flutterwings,

Beautiful poem, picture and music you have presented here today.

                                   Dawn

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7 posted 2001-10-28 04:38 PM



Upon a popped corn's cloud to be
along with Maggie and her fantasies...

so enjoyed!

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