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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-10-27 07:00 PM



Reserved Heart
~*~

Reserved
permanent
booked for life
that part of my heart
will never part
never to be shared
no words
will make it go away
no thoughts
can lead me astray
rooted deep
this stronghold of love

BloomingRose

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-10-27 07:03 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo romantic, sweet rose! (smiles) Your beautiful heart blooms to the beauty of love and romance always in your beautiful words! (smiles) God always prepares all our loves, and makes sure they are reserved for eternity! (big hugggsssssss) I love it! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-27 07:37 PM


So heartfelt. Such strength of love and determination fill this poem. Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-10-27 08:40 PM


BloomingRose~

'rooted deep
this stronghold of love'


What a beautiful thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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4 posted 2001-11-01 02:57 PM



Deb-
   YES!  I love this.
   And, leave it to Marge to beat me to
   my favorite line. LOL
   This is just wonderful, sweet friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

doreen peri
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5 posted 2001-11-01 04:10 PM


oh yes, i know this feeling very well.... thank you for sharing this  
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