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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-27 06:25 PM


He took me to heaven
a place I rarely visit.
Oh that it could have been forever,
immersed in his warmth
holding back tomorrow
which came all to soon.
Even as I laid there
replete with his bittersweet love
I saw the end draw near
and my resolve faltered
My hands
moved of their own accord
They did not want to let go.
Never wanted to say goodbye.
I said I wouldn't cry.
I lied.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-27 06:30 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sandra, my heart goes out to you! (sad sigh) My heart breaks in these sad words of lost love, and I too pray so much you cry, but in tears of joy to holding close to true loves heart forever! (sigh) I promise that very soon you will be embraced by such beautiful love that will lift you to paradise eternally! (big hugggssssss) My heart is with you always, sweet Sandra, I love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-10-27 06:49 PM


Thanks Noah, Love you too, and I will be ok. Someday.
Sandra

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3 posted 2001-10-27 06:56 PM


Sandra,  the beauty of this (hard to see)
is that you are writing about it.  You
are writing beautifully and expressing your
feelings.  Keep going, you will get there.

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-10-27 07:31 PM


none of us want to admit we cry.....

Kathleen
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"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Startime
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5 posted 2001-10-27 07:35 PM


And I will cry with you. Forever is a long time and with a love like you have to give there will be someone yet who can give as well as receive it. ***hugs***

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-10-27 11:34 PM


I know of a great way to forget these feelings, even if it is only for a while. We'll go to N'Awlins and drink, dance and be merry. We'll put that smile back on your face!!! *hugs*

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

DawnG
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7 posted 2001-10-28 11:55 PM


Sandra,

I wish there was something I could do to help rid you of this pain. But as long as you need to write about it, I'll be here to read and support.

                                    Dawn

Keith Morgan
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8 posted 2001-10-29 12:45 PM


Honestly written, nicely done.
doreen peri
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9 posted 2001-10-29 01:34 AM


crying is a good thiing, a very good thing....healthy, cleansing...hands often don't want to let go..... but to write that line is light years ahead of those who don't understand the reality  of having to before letting the tide sink your own ship

very fine writing, sandra.......

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10 posted 2001-10-29 01:40 AM


Sandra, you took the words right out of my mouth this time. I once wrote, "When I told you I loved you, I lied. When I said I didn't cry when you left, I lied."
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-10-29 02:32 AM


I know the heartache and disappointment as you realize that another opportunity is lost but I also know that new moments of love can come very quickly to a heart that prepares itself for new opportunities...James
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12 posted 2001-10-29 03:07 AM


Sandra,

Words of comfort or wisdom fail me right now.  Just know there are a lot of folks in here that know you are special and are wishing the best for you.  Tears are good sometimes.  They help wash away the bitterness.  Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

rwood
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13 posted 2001-10-29 06:34 AM


Sometimes..we visit heaven with someone...briefly..because that is what it is..a dream...that might not have been if it were to last. There are moments for us that are like jewels that we will carry forever. Even if brief...still a shining moment. Thank you for reminding me of that.

Sincerely,
Regina

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14 posted 2001-10-29 12:27 PM


Sandra,
        You have captured all the pain perfectly, unfortunately.  I know just how you feel. There will be better days ahead, just don't stop believing.....
            Love, Elise

Robert A
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15 posted 2001-10-29 12:52 PM


Lot of pain in these words, does it help to write it out?
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