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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-27 03:11 PM



As the piano plays
I think of you
again
A non existent feeling
coexisting with me
*Your love*
That never was
but that I still
grasp
How can I love you like this
expecting nothing back
An empty soul
without a spirit
*Your Love*
I still hold
unable to accept
that
my love was never
returned

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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2001-10-27 03:21 PM


*sigh* my heart breaks for you that the love you wish so much to share was not returned. *sigh* keep your heart and eyes open for I am sure there are many who would share with you the tenderness that I see in all your writing.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
2 posted 2001-10-27 03:58 PM




Oh.....the heartbreaking pains of love unrequited...

A touching heartfelt piece

Thank you
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catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2001-10-27 04:21 PM


Oh hon, I am feeling this one so much. So sad isn't it? And why, someone just tell me WHY it is set up like this over and over, for most of us.
Take care.
Sandra

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