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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-10-27 01:51 PM



Come On And Pluck Me

~*Marge Tindal*~

Soft-fingered serenade
strummed across my fret
Waiting for you to chord me
I can hardly bear it

I've stayed in tune
waiting for your touch
So come ahead and pluck me
I'd love it, oh so much

Play me soft in serenade
as you stroke the strings of me
Cradled in your loving embrace
I will cry with sweet melody



*Tee-Hee-Hee, Bill ...
Having a little fun with your new guitar~
Promise ?

October 27, 2001

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-10-27 01:56 PM




(big hugggssssss) Awwww Marge, you're an expert at making all of us smile! (smiles) Bill is going to love this, and I bet he will be an excellent rock star soon! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-10-27 01:59 PM


Marge,
Your mind is like the bright of a fire fly
It always catches my eye. *L*

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3 posted 2001-10-27 02:08 PM


lol!!!

marge marge marge!!

don't fret, ms Poet,  you're words are instrumental, and whether you've got your chords on or your jam-mies, you're playin' somebody's song,...... you sure got your rhythm method down! this one's finger pickin' good! electified! acoustified! and if  nobody takes you up on this offer, well, all i can say is, that's really plucked up

*wink*




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4 posted 2001-10-27 02:14 PM


Noah~
Thanks.

Seymour~
*wink*

Doreen~
Would love to hang around and chat ... but, I gotta *gig*~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-10-27 02:21 PM


Now, you knew I was expecting to see some feathers flying in this one, but you threw in that tune playing thingie that plucked sinewy chords (gutstrings) right outta me. Oh, you are good. Great pictures, too.  

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-27-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-10-27 03:15 PM


Thats what I like...a woman that plays sweet music when she's stroked...James
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7 posted 2001-10-27 04:23 PM


Marge...You got alot of pluck to write such a baudy invitation to jam..  Hugs!
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8 posted 2001-10-27 04:23 PM


Tenderly stroked she vibrates with the sweet music of her heart. Oh how very excellent. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2001-10-27 04:31 PM



A little old soul, a little rock, a bit of roll...

Well done, gal!

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-10-27 04:45 PM


MidniteSun~
Thanks ... I kind of got a tickle out of this one myself~

JamesMichael~
Yeoooooooooooowie ... I know what you mean~

Martie~
Tee-Hee !
Yeah, I do, don't I ?

StarTime~
Thanks bunches~
Just doing a little fine-tuning here~

Karilea~
Or a little blues played masterfully, low and slow~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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