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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2001-10-27 12:45 PM



Go ahead peek right in,
Be daring on this ride,
In you I will confide,
Walk with me to the edge,
No need to hide, were near the edge,
Leap, without knowing,
Plunge right in to the dreams unwoven,
Be bold beyond your wildest imaginations,
Believe in yourself,
Now you've accomplished one of the hardest things,
We believe in everyone else,
But what happened to the self,
Go ahead take a chance,
Oh no it's not circumstance,
It's worth discovering, worth the haste,
It's a new world,
It's no more let's pretend,
It's for real it's you.

© Copyright 2001 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-27 12:57 PM


Just makes ya wanna dive right in, doesn't it?

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (edited 10-27-2001).]

Rosebud1229
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North Carolina
2 posted 2001-10-27 01:00 PM


Tracey, I am the biggest by far, so mainly speaking to myself, when I wrote this, thanks for the read. Just as your quote says, this maybe insanity breeding, love that line.
MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2001-10-27 02:14 PM




This makes lift up my spirit and makes really want to climb ...be bold.....
"Be daring on this ride"

A powerful piece.....

Thank you
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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
4 posted 2001-10-27 03:16 PM


*giggling* I know this is going to sound very strange but something about this poem makes me want to dance under the moonlight. (and not fully clothed either) A poem set to the tune of the wild beating of our hearts. BRAVO!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-10-27 07:06 PM




YAY!!! Yes, if we all believe in ourselves, we can achieve anything, and with each other, we can all make harmony! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet rose, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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