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When An Old Love Comes New
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When An Old Love Comes New |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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When An Old Love Comes New ~*Marge Tindal*~  When an old love comes new and smiles just for you You realize while smiling through tears that he wears the same eyes you've dreamed of for years~ When an old love comes round with laughter and song singing classics he wrote with notes that belong to memories made before it was known he was meant to sing them for you all along~ When an old love burns new in embers revived touched by the breeze on softly-felt sighs~ You know that the song is meant to be sung in gentle notes of treasured renew bringing raptured pleasure to be shared by two~ ~Bill, this one's for you. Thanks for the beautiful inspiration~ October 26, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lovely Marge. Funny how someone from our past can bring back the old feelings again so easily. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Marge; I really enjoyed this poem. I think the picture adds so much to the words. Good read. Wanda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, This would make a wonderful song, When an old love comes new. *L* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Don't you just love it and am amazed when such inspirations come to you from the past? (smiles) I love the classics, and I love doo-wop and jazz! (smiles) It always makes me feel so romantic inside and helps me to write out my expressions of love! (sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always so fun and amazing to read! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracey~ Yeah, isn't it ? Wanda~ Thanks so much~ Seymour~ I hope so~  Noah~ Thanks bunches~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
renewing a love is the most beautiful treasure...... thank you for this! truer words were never written...... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Oh...now you have to know that this makes me smile soooooo big.  Was loving every word of this as I read... and knowing. Love this! Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
And he has filled your heart with the most incredible song of love. I am speechless. I am in awe. How beautiful. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ *smiles* ... yes, true, true, true~ Vicky~ You little stinker ... you knew from the title alone~ Love you, gal~ StarTime~ Thanks ... can't wait to hear him sing this one~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sigh, this is just how I felt 2 weeks ago, and oops-he didn't mean it. How can something so right go so wrong. I love this poem though, it speaks of such love and happiness. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Awwwwww, sounds like your 'guitar' was out of tune~ Sorry ... but sometimes it just plays the blues~ Glad you liked my little tune~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When an old love happens my way He only has one thing to say... As his feet fly around the bend I hear shouted "... worse now than then!" I love this tender penning, Marge... just wish I knew the experience. *G* |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Marge, What an inspiration this is. Absolutely beaitful from start to finish. I can't pick a favorite line. They are all wonderful. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
just when I need this revival, truly enjoyed! ~ cottage |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
just lovely Marge - hmmm, wouldn't hurt my feelings at all to have a few "old loves" step through...snicker, snicker... jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge...as always, another one of your exceptional poems....Even as we grow, we can have wonderful romance in our lives. This made me feel very good. Thank You. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Marge, This is absolutely beautiful. Love the pic too. Dawn |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Thoroughly enjoyed this one Marge! Take care!"Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ *sigh* I agree with Seymour...you've sung us a beautiful song with notes of yearning, reflection and just the right amount of joyful anticipation Loved it!Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Marge...James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I can certainly relate to this one Just lovely, Marge |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like it - I've also learned that "old love" properly kept and nurtured, can indeed be "forever" love... Lovely words, dear Marge..  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ You just tickle me ... and then you show up in my mail box with sweet caring~ Thank you~ Love you~ AWhispersCaress~ Thank you so much. It is definitely an inspired-from-the-heart piece~ Cottage~ Thanks. Glad to perk up your 'revival'! JWesley~ Oh ... I'd recommend it highly ! !  Magnus~ I appreciate your reply~ Makes me feel good to share it~ Thank you~ Dawn~ Thanks soooooo much~ EagleOne~ Hi, sweetie Glad to share with you~ SmittenKitten~ Awwww, thanks so much. It was beautiful to have it sung back to me~ JamesMichael~ Thank you~ Elizabeth~ *smiles* Nan~ *another big smile* VanDana~ Thank you, hon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh my friends ... pardon me while I reminsce with a smile~ I am soooooooooooooooo happy to have this 'old love' come 'new' in my heart~  *Sighhhhhhhhhhh* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Marge, I sware, you have a way, and I will follow anywhere |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a beauty Marge..... Hope all is well with YOU!!!! HUGS, Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just doing a little *heart* reminiscing ... because, well just because~ This was the first poem I wrote for Bill ... seems so long ago ... and yet ... seems like yesterday~ I love you, baby~  ~*Me ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...You guys are taking a trip down memory lane...and sounds like you're enjoying it. Good for you!! It makes me happy too!! |
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MiniGuitarMan Junior Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 26Florida |
Because I still love you MORELY ! Bill- |
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