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When An Old Love Comes New

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Marge Tindal
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When An Old Love Comes New

~*Marge Tindal*~

When an old love comes new
and smiles just for you
You realize while smiling through tears
that he wears the same eyes
you've dreamed of for years~

When an old love comes round
with laughter and song
singing classics he wrote
with notes that belong
to memories made before it was known
he was meant to sing them
for you all along~

When an old love burns new
in embers revived
touched by the breeze
on softly-felt sighs~

You know that the song is meant to be sung
in gentle notes of treasured renew
bringing raptured pleasure
to be shared by two~


~Bill, this one's for you.
Thanks for the beautiful inspiration~

October 26, 2001


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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Lovely Marge. Funny how someone from our past can bring back the old feelings again so easily.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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Marge; I really enjoyed this poem.  I think the picture adds so much to the words.  Good read.  Wanda
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Marge,
This would make a wonderful song, When an old
love comes new. *L*
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(big hugggsssss) Don't you just love it and am amazed when such inspirations come to you from the past? (smiles) I love the classics, and I love doo-wop and jazz! (smiles) It always makes me feel so romantic inside and helps me to write out my expressions of love! (sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always so fun and amazing to read! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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Tracey~
Yeah, isn't it ?

Wanda~
Thanks so much~

Seymour~
I hope so~

Noah~
Thanks bunches~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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renewing a love is the most beautiful treasure......

thank you for this!

truer words were never written......
vlraynes
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Marge-
   Oh...now you have to know that this
   makes me smile soooooo big.
   Was loving every word of this as I read...
   and knowing.
   Love this!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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And he has filled your heart with the most incredible song of love. I am speechless. I am in awe. How beautiful.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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Doreen~
*smiles* ... yes, true, true, true~

Vicky~
You little stinker ... you knew from the title alone~
Love you, gal~

StarTime~
Thanks ... can't wait to hear him sing this one~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sigh, this is just how I felt 2 weeks ago, and oops-he didn't mean it. How can something so right go so wrong. I love this poem though, it speaks of such love and happiness.
Sandra
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CatalinaMoon~
Awwwwww, sounds like your 'guitar' was out of tune~
Sorry ... but sometimes it just plays the blues~
Glad you liked my little tune~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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When an old love happens my way
He only has one thing to say...
As his feet fly around the bend
I hear shouted "... worse now than then!"

I love this tender penning, Marge... just wish I knew the experience. *G*
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Marge,

What an inspiration this is.
Absolutely beaitful from start
to finish. I can't pick a favorite line.
They are all wonderful.

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

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just when I need this revival, truly enjoyed!

~ cottage
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just lovely Marge - hmmm, wouldn't hurt my feelings at all to have a few "old loves" step through...snicker, snicker...

jwesley
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Marge...as always,  another one of your
exceptional poems....Even as we grow,
we can have wonderful romance in our lives.
This made me feel very good.  Thank You.
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Marge,

This is absolutely beautiful. Love the pic too.

                          Dawn
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Thoroughly enjoyed this one Marge!   Take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison

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Marge~ *sigh* I agree with Seymour...you've sung us a beautiful song with notes of yearning, reflection and just the right amount of joyful anticipation    Loved it!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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Very nice Marge...James
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I can certainly relate to this one
Just lovely, Marge
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I like it - I've also learned that "old love" properly kept and nurtured, can indeed be "forever" love... Lovely words, dear Marge..
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loved it
Marge Tindal
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SuthernGal~
You just tickle me ...
and then you show up in my mail box with sweet caring~
Thank you~
Love you~

AWhispersCaress~
Thank you so much.
It is definitely an inspired-from-the-heart piece~

Cottage~
Thanks.  Glad to perk up your 'revival'!

JWesley~
Oh ... I'd recommend it highly ! !  

Magnus~
I appreciate your reply~
Makes me feel good to share it~ Thank you~

Dawn~
Thanks soooooo much~

EagleOne~
Hi, sweetie  
Glad to share with you~

SmittenKitten~
Awwww, thanks so much.
It was beautiful to have it sung back to me~

JamesMichael~
Thank you~

Elizabeth~
*smiles*

Nan~
*another big smile*

VanDana~
Thank you, hon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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