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Nightshade
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0 posted 2001-10-27 12:19 PM




Once upon a time..
Twenty-nine years ago
An Enchantress married a Wizard
She's my sister, so I should know.
Now, the Wizard he was lonely
Enchantress had lost her spark
But their meeting, it was magic
Love's light cast out the dark.
Their home it is a castle
Nestled on a quiet street
Where fairies plant the garden
Gnomes help to keep it neat.
You may shake your head and chuckle
But what I state is true
Piano plays while night flowers bloom
Stars come out as if on cue.
Their abode is such a mystical place
Children come to take a peek
At teddy bears picnicing on the lawn
While doves play hide and seek.
She pens words of love's allure
He waves a wand of trickery
Both help our troubles disappear
That's what magicians do you see.
My anniversary gift is this poem
Honouring their spellbound life
For Enchantress and her husband
The Wizard and his wife.


      Happy Anniversary NancyLee and John!!!
           I love you both more than
                  you know.          Always, Chris
                                        Oct.27/01


© Copyright 2001 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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1 posted 2001-10-27 12:46 PM


Oh this is simply wonderful. What an enchanting world to live in. I didn't know NancyLee was your sister. Learn something new everday.

Congratulations Nancy Lee and John. And may there be many more  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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2 posted 2001-10-27 02:13 PM


Tracey - Thanks for responding. Yes, the cat's out of the bag....Enchantress is my sister....although we have been kind of dropping hints.   Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2001-10-27 02:29 PM


STANDING OVATION!!!A magical gift it is too. Absolutely beautiful. I am sure they will love this treasure from your heart.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-10-27 02:31 PM


Startime - Thankyou....she likes it alright, we have been chatting. Glad you enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2001-10-27 03:18 PM


And may there still be lots of magic in the air...James
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6 posted 2001-10-27 03:26 PM


CHRIS!  Well this time you have really surprised me!  No wonder you were tied up yesterday!  For once I am totally at a loss for words.  A thank you just doesn't seem adequate, as I can see you have woven almost every aspect of my life into this beautifully created piece of writing.  I love you too!  

Tracey~Thank you for your best wishes, and yes, we are sisters.  If we get enough applause we go into our sister act.  
I even have pics to insert if you like! I don't think you want me to go there! LOL.

Karen~Yes!  I do love this...it is a gift to treasure.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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7 posted 2001-10-27 03:31 PM


Well we learn something new everyday.. ha..enjoyed reading Chris..
                                      
                                            ~Victoria~

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8 posted 2001-10-27 03:48 PM


JamesMichael - There will always be magic in the air as we were raised that way - magically. Thankyou. Chris
NancyLee - when I said I was "tied up" yesterday I meant "literally !!" oops...ummm..that wasn't meant for everyone..lol..just kidding...I love you big sister and your sentimental husband too. hugs, Chris
Victoria - hopefully yes, we all do learn something new everyday....and if we are lucky, it will be something wonderful. Thanks for reading. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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9 posted 2001-10-27 04:18 PM


What a wonderful poem, and congratulations on your magical life, oh enchanted one.
Sandra

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10 posted 2001-10-27 05:00 PM


catalinamoon - knowing that you took the time to read this, let alone comment, has made me very proud. Thankyou. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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11 posted 2001-10-27 05:11 PM


Chris, You won't believe this Chris...but, I forgot to add it to my library...lol...sorry!  Teed

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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12 posted 2001-10-27 05:15 PM


Enchantress - you are allowed to forget dear lady because.......it's your anniversary !! Got you goin' there didn't I? lol. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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13 posted 2001-10-27 05:36 PM




(big hugggssssssss) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! CONGRATULATIONS SWEET NANCY AND JOHN!!! OH MY GOSH CHRIS, THIS IS SOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! (kiss on cheek) HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!!! You all have such beautiful hearts, sweet friends, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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14 posted 2001-10-27 07:08 PM


o yuh they lived happily e'er after yuh!
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15 posted 2001-10-27 07:29 PM


Noah, Thankyou for your sweet comments and wishes for my sister and her hubby. Chris

Walt - I love happy endings - don't you? Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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16 posted 2001-10-27 11:23 PM


Congrats on the anniversary *S* Nancy Lee *S* and having a sister to write about it like this

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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17 posted 2001-10-27 11:37 PM


What an enchanting poem! Nightshade, I was wondering about you two, thought there was a close connection. But lots of people say sister and brother without meaning it literally. This is such a beautiful tribute, and a chance for us to join in with our own
cheers for a        
            HAPPY ANNIVERSARY
         Enchantress and the Wizard
              

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18 posted 2001-10-28 02:09 AM


Nightshade,
I wish I had a sister like that. Wow! And I wish I had a castle like that too! Awesome Poem! Awesome Gift!

Congratulations you guys and may you have many, many more!  

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19 posted 2001-10-28 04:06 AM


~*  Happy Anniversary Nancy Lee and John  *~

What a lovely poem Chris, one I am sure will be treasured for years to come.  
Again, Happy Anniversary you two!

~*~  Carpe' Diem  ~*~

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20 posted 2001-10-28 12:50 PM


Rusty Knight - Yes, I am very lucky to have a sister such as she. Thankyou, Chris

Midnitesun - Thankyou for reading and responding - hugs, Chris

Larry C. - Many thanks for your response.

Mysteria - it is an honour that you read and responded to my little ditty. Thankyou for the lovely picture that went along with your comments.  
   To All of You....Many thanks for helping me make my sister and her husbands special day even more so.  Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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