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The Other Half
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The Other Half |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Other Half We face blank canvas every day With half already on display But half is full of misty dream Full of wild and reign supreme. That is the half I take to bed The other half to me is dead. My horse awaits sir Galahad Now I ask you, is that so bad? And I ride through the countryside My lance and I and favor tied. To touch the mist within the Vail Perhaps to search the Holy Grail Each night to me a gift of reign With soft and sweet and none of pain. I fill this half with valleys green With rage and love and every mean. And if I stop and ask some wine Would you refresh your cup and mine? |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"Now I ask you, is that so bad?" Certainly not......  Oh....such a beautiful piece full of dreams. I am such a dreamer myself....dream of Camelot and haughty knights....  Thank you ..your poems are always a pleasure to read. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 10-27-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If you'll come through meadow green and knock upon thy cottage door I shall serve thee bread and cheese and fair wines for thee I'll pour... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchanted, You do me honor to read my poems and comment so sweetly. *L* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, And who could ask for anything more? *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We face blank canvas every day With half already on display But half is full of misty dream Full of wild and reign supreme. That is the half I take to bed The other half to me is dead. My horse awaits sir Galahad Now I ask you, is that so bad? ===================================== To touch the mist within the Vail Perhaps to search the Holy Grail Each night to me a gift of reign With soft and sweet and none of pain. ======================================= And if I stop and ask some wine Would you refresh your cup and mine? ======================================== Would I pour you some wine???????? Baby...for you ... I'll stomp the grapes with me Tinkerbell piddys Yer so Kewl... I LOVE this rhyme scheme dream very cool poem me Stinky Knight *winkiewinkie*  meThis distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Oh yes, a poem well deserving of all the honors that should be given to any knight who feeds the dreams of those in need. The wine would gladly be poured if the knight would stop by to rest from hard fought battles. *sigh* I love this kind of poem, therefore, I LOVE IT!!!  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A wonderful poem filled with hope and wonderment, we can be very thankful for our dream time, filling our pages with mistery and our minds with beauty and fulfillment. Loved the poem, very well done, look forward to reading more. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You warm me till I feel hot flashes. Winkiewinkie Stinky Startime, I agree and thank you for the Love it. *L* Rick, Big thank you for the nice comment. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
JM, now, no way would I ever stomp his grape, until I saw if this knight was one hairy ape! But should he have skin, soft and devine, I'd invite him in and share more than wine! Seymour - very nice poem but I couldn't resist this! lol ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria, Accept the jest and offer my best. *L* |
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Kevin Taylor Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185near Vancouver, BC, Canada |
I love it! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so lovely and enchanting. I love dream worlds like this. I think everyone should have one If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely written Seymour T. Please fill my glass for me. Wine goes very well with poetry like this.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My my...how lovely! Yes, I'll have a little nip sire. Well done Sy. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~To be reminded that they still exist. Thank you. For this. *Peace. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. I like this. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is the most poetic way I have ever seen to try to get free wine....I salute you, Sy!  |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Dear Sy...How Camelot of you! I believe the outpour of those wishing to wine with you would overflow the sea. Beautifully penned. Sincerely, Regina |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kevin, Big thank you. Tracey, Sweet reply, thank you. Magnus, You got it, thanks. Nancy, Thanks for the hugs. Spitfire, Thank you dear. SmartChick, Glad you liked. Balladeer, Can always count on you for a clever answer. Rwood, Thanks for the beautiful reply. |
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