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Kevin
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0 posted 2001-10-27 01:21 AM


Every smile has its reasons
Every kiss hopes for forever
Every heart with passing seasons
Dreams of one to make things better
Every glance becomes a fable
Once upon a time of laughter
There was a boy willing and able
To be your man for ever after


© Copyright 2001 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-27 08:29 AM



It's been a while since we've seen you, Kevin! Welcome home, and thanks for this!

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-10-27 09:55 AM


Kevin~
Hi cutie pie~
Good to see your smile again~

This is a sincerely sweet write~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Startime
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3 posted 2001-10-27 10:00 AM


How wonderfully romantic. I really liked reading this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it with me today.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Aimster
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4 posted 2001-10-28 10:53 AM


Kev,

Hello!! Wonderful write...this
was just beatiful. Thanks for the
wonderful smile you've put on my face.
You are such a cutie BTW  

Take care.
Amy

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2001-10-28 01:07 PM


Like the thoughts here...It's good to want a relationship that last for a long time...I am finding that the most important part of a relationship is that both parties have the same mind and desires for if one is thinking forever and the other is thinking lets just have a good time and go our separate ways problems will soon surface...James
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6 posted 2001-10-28 01:17 PM


Great write here!  Hope to see more from you!
~Hugs, Nancy~

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-10-28 01:18 PM


Kevin,
A lovely poem. Enjoyed the read.

Flutterwings
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8 posted 2001-10-28 02:48 PM


Hey! Kevin, I love the rhythm and rhyme in this loving piece. It flowed like ripples on a babbling brook... Pen on!  
Love and  peace Maggie ((~.~))


Marina
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9 posted 2001-10-28 08:06 PM


Hi Keven!  So nice to see ya posting again.  Much enjoyed as always.  I have always love how you write, heart and soul.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



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10 posted 2001-10-28 08:10 PM


Welcome back to the blue pages, Kevin  

What a sweet write    I love this~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Tiersdin
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11 posted 2001-10-28 08:36 PM


Sweet words, Kevin, enjoyed reading...

~Tier

Tracey
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12 posted 2001-10-28 08:55 PM


This is lovely. I love the truthful words spoken in it and the thoughts it conveys.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Aimster
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13 posted 2001-10-30 11:46 PM


BUMP!!!  

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

Elizabeth
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14 posted 2001-10-31 12:31 PM


Very sweet, Kevin, but sad....

(Thanks for the bump, Amy, or I would have missed this!)

God bless America, my home sweet home.

doreen peri
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15 posted 2001-10-31 12:58 PM


i didn't find this sad at all..... i found it beautiful.........

wonderful writing  

Mon Cherie
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16 posted 2001-11-01 05:45 AM


This is so sweet and romantic. Pure love forever after. =)
SmartChick
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17 posted 2001-11-01 08:55 AM


What a lovely poem this is. Thank you for sharing it.
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