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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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since 2001-10-23
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0 posted 2001-10-26 09:27 PM


     
Someday we will join
Before the eyes of God
and become one

     

When that day arrives
I can only imagine
The depths we can explore
The hights we will attain

For it's you that I adore
Being apart is causing me pain
For us to be together, my dear
Is no simple task at all

We have obsticles to overcome
The biggest is our fear
Alas we both have tender hearts

And while others have drawn from us
All which they could take
It's still beyond our nature
To turn our backs upon them now
And leave them in the wake

We will overcome our fear somehow
Because if I can't have you
My true love
I'd rather be with God above



[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-26-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-26 10:44 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Benita, this is so so sweet! God has prepared the perfect love for you, and when the time is right, you will embrace him eternally! (smiles) This is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2001-10-26 11:24 PM


*sigh* so very beautiful and filled with love. Your vow will come true I am sure and then you will both have your hearts desire. Very well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
3 posted 2001-10-27 07:16 AM


True love waits. At least thats what the song says.  
Anyway, this is a nice poem.

Hugs,
Deb

Red-uni
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 192
Georgia, USA
4 posted 2001-10-27 05:04 PM


WOW....you hit home to me.  I have too soft a hurt and am having to learn to say "no".  It is so hard.  Goood luck in this task to both you and your future spouse.
Red  

Red-uni
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 192
Georgia, USA
5 posted 2001-10-27 05:04 PM


oops..sorry...in previous reply replace hurt with heart.   DUH.
Love your read.
Red

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