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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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0 posted 2001-10-25 08:40 PM



I have two lovers
This very day
I love you both
What can I say

One has touched
My body and my heart
The other has touched
My heart and my soul

Whom should I choose?
In my heart I know,
But the one I will loose
Will leave a hole

I have two lovers
This very day
I love you both
In a different way

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-10-25 08:48 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Choose the one that makes you feel happier, let your beautiful heart decide and you will have the most beautiful love always, and you can cherish the other always as a close friend! (sigh) Such a beautiful poem, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-25 09:35 PM


*giggling* well I just wish I had one. *sigh* well maybe someday. I don't know how you are going to be able to chose between them. Good luck.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven
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3 posted 2001-10-25 09:51 PM


a choice. . . which??  only you can know. . .

I'm sure that this will speak to many. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

DawnG
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4 posted 2001-10-25 09:54 PM


Benita,

I agree with Startime, just one would be nice. I wouldn't be greedy, just one nice guy who loves me would be the greatest of all worlds.

                               Dawn

BtwnRockandHardPlace
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5 posted 2001-10-25 09:56 PM


Dawn, and Startime,

Don't ever get into the mess I am in. Torn between two lovers is NO fun. Trust me. It may sound wonderful [OK I admit it's nice at times] but it has a very hard downside on the emotions!!

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff

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